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[Series] After Hours - Part 24

Dec 27, 2006 17:51

Title: After Hours
Part: 24
Authors: makingamochrie and anesthesiagirl
Rating: Hard R
Summary: An afternoon of good, clean fun for the boys.
Disclaimer: Completely AU. Don't own, don't sue!

As always, comments and criticisms welcomed. And our apologies for the delay in posting.....darn holidays were busy!

( Colin dialed the number he now knew by heart, his fingers dancing flawlessly over the keys as his eyes kept their focus on the roadway ahead. )

s: after hours, a: anesthesiagirl, a: makingamochrie

Comments 8

corliamat December 28 2006, 00:34:56 UTC

Woot! An update!

Love this chapter!

The sailing....the romance.....*happy sigh*

anesthesiagirl December 29 2006, 02:47:40 UTC

glad you like it. i have such a vision of the two of them out on the water together. ah.......romance!

irradiatedsoup December 28 2006, 17:47:50 UTC

I like how this fic feels real, even though it is AU. You and Makingamochrie write really weel together too. Good stuff! More please.

irradiatedsoup December 28 2006, 17:49:11 UTC

Um, I meant *well there.

*coughs, shuffles away*

anesthesiagirl December 29 2006, 02:48:56 UTC

i knew what you meant! thanks though. that means alot to me to hear someone say that! i'm glad you're enjoying it and i'm glad it felt real to you. i was really trying to make it as real as possible in all details.

desiredeffect December 30 2006, 04:18:34 UTC

I've never really been a big fan of sailing, I have a tendency to get nauseous when it's out on the water :S But still, reading this really just makes me want to get on a boat.

So adorable. And Colin's enthusiasm for just showing Ryan how to control the boat and everything was just delightful. You guys are my crack (:

anesthesiagirl January 2 2007, 11:41:34 UTC

wow.....i've never been anyone's crack before! :) well, thanks for reading.....and may i recommend dramamine!

clayangel January 21 2007, 16:22:33 UTC

That was such a nice chapter. ^_^ I love the sailing thing; it has such a nice feel to it. And the details were great. I love it when something is gone into in such detail. I mean, it's obvious you know something of sailing, and it really adds to the story.

...but wouldn't Ryan know a thing or two about boats, himself, growing up with a fisherman for a father? Or I could be off, and his father might have just worked with fish but not actually caught them. ^_^ God knows I don't have the best memory. :P