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Seldom Second Chances (12 a/13)

Jan 15, 2015 18:37

Title: Seldom Second Chances
Author: Clay
Pairing: Ryan/Colin
Rating: NC-17 (for earlier chapters)
Summary: When a freak accident drops an impossible opportunity in Ryan's lap, it's up to him to decide whether to squander it, or to change his fate by going after the one thing he's always wanted.
Word Count: ~2900
Prompt & Author's Notes: I ( Read more... )

g: fantasy, g: romance, g: drama/suspense, [whose-a-thon entries], a: clayangel, p: colin/ryan, s: seldom second chances

Comments 7

rycolfan January 16 2015, 00:00:42 UTC

Oh, ouch. Colin's got a point, but... please fix them. *sniffle*

(Adding small silent cheer for Colin/Greg. :P)

clayangel February 1 2015, 22:33:04 UTC

Soon... And yeah...at first it was going to be some random guy Colin hooked up with, but then I was like screw it, it's so much more fun if it's one of the guys. ^_^ And Greg was really just the obvious choice.

fta2008 January 16 2015, 01:55:22 UTC

Oh Ryan idiot. Colin King drama. This complicated .. I no longer know any two of the other idiot than the other

But I'm really cry from the words of Colin. I feel that many he suffered. Ryan does not care and that even a word I love you and this really hurts
It is difficult to take care of and love someone does not know the importance of words like love and does not know that the words are all we have to self-expression.

I think the next part should Ryan that shows his feelings and to be more honest and passionate in order to gain the trust Colin

Please, no more fighting ^_^

clayangel February 1 2015, 22:36:49 UTC

Oh, I'm totally with you. I don't think either one is really right or wrong here. Ryan's been selfish, yes, but he's not a mind reader. Colin never told him how he felt about any of the things Ryan did to hurt him. And now he's kept it all bottled up inside, only to explode. But since this story is about Ryan's journey, that's really my main focus. And don't worry, no more fighting. ^_^

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clayangel February 1 2015, 22:40:03 UTC

Oh, I'm the same way. ^_^ But even more than the touching, it's the looks they share that just fill me warmth. I think I could be having the worst day ever and the memory of that adorable, giggly smile Colin gives Ryan over finding the cardboard cutout of himself in that box would make everything right in the world.

roseofpain84 February 13 2015, 07:35:31 UTC

And the fact that Ryan giggles back at him before he even finds out what it was that had Colin laughing. And the fact that they are chatting with each other all the time where the cameras are on or off and....other things. <3

clayangel February 13 2015, 13:57:21 UTC

Yeah. ^_^ God, they're adorable.