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Seldom Second Chances (9b/13)

Nov 27, 2014 09:18

Title: Seldom Second Chances
Author: Clay
Pairing: Ryan/Colin
Rating: NC-17 (for later chapters)
Summary: When a freak accident drops an impossible opportunity in Ryan's lap, it's up to him to decide whether to squander it, or to change his fate by going after the one thing he's always wanted.
Word Count: ~1600
Prompt & Author's Notes: End ( Read more... )

g: fantasy, g: romance, g: drama/suspense, [whose-a-thon entries], a: clayangel, p: colin/ryan, s: seldom second chances

Comments 11

rycolfan November 27 2014, 22:10:50 UTC

Oh... interesting...

Damn it, I need to know the end of that video. More! ^_^

clayangel December 4 2014, 16:26:34 UTC

I suck so hard at responding to these in a timely manner. :P But yes, I think we'll revisit that video later.

fta2008 November 28 2014, 04:10:52 UTC

Wow I can not wait to see the next
Oh I wished only that they have some comfort and a lot of talk I forgot present 2013
And gravitated to the new reality that is created by Ryan ...
Are making more of the story thrills and curiosity video I have also said that the phone is not a phone Ryan ???

I beg you to be happy end to this story have become unexpected for me ..

With love and respect, as well as a kiss on the forehead ^ _ *

clayangel December 4 2014, 16:28:53 UTC

^_^ Thank you. And don't worry, I'm a sucker for happy endings. I don't think I'm capable of writing a story without one.

madie600 November 29 2014, 14:15:07 UTC

Oh I like the ending! My suspicions are turning out to be correct... That Colin might be in the same kind of predicament as Ryan, at least the time traveling bit. I don't want this story to ever end!! It's just too good :)

clayangel December 4 2014, 16:30:10 UTC

^_^ Thank you! I was wondering if anyone was picking up on the clues I was dropping about Colin. ...not that I'm going to admit what's going on with him just yet.

space_of_heart December 2 2014, 03:45:54 UTC

The first thing that popped out of my mouth was a loud oh shit. This story is fantastic! I never comment but I couldn't NOT comment on this chapter. I very much love this fic, please post the next chapter soon :)

clayangel December 4 2014, 16:31:07 UTC

^_^ I love it when a story makes me react that way, and I'm pleased my story got you to react that way! Thank you for leaving a comment; I really appreciate it.

madie600 December 5 2014, 08:37:15 UTC

That's excatly what came out of my mouth too!! :)

roseofpain84 February 13 2015, 05:41:16 UTC

Ahahaa YESH.
I figured it out in 8.5 and then so many other things made sense!!

Also, you have officially earned a place in the list of story tellers that make me annoyingly hungry when I read. J.K. Rowling and Enid Blyton are the other 2 proud members of this list.

clayangel February 13 2015, 13:56:03 UTC

I was wondering when people would start to figure it out. ^_^ Colin being from the future wasn't something I had originally intended to be in the story, but I think that's why I ended up getting writer's block on it for like a year and a half before picking it up again. It was like the one element I was missing to tie the whole thing together.

And thank you! ^_^ I think the fact that I enjoy cooking/food in general ends up coming through in my stories because I can write about it with more detail than I would have otherwise. The stories that usually make me hungry are high fantasy tales, probably because the food is different enough from our usual fare that it needs to be described in more detail. And they always have things smothered in honey, and I don't even like honey all that much, but damn do fantasy stories make me want some. ^_^