[Fanfic] Feels Like Coming Home

[roseofpain84]

             The studio was buzzing with excitement, laughter, some nervousness and several technicians and members of the crew running around trying to make sure everything was in order. Wayne and Aisha were chattering by the desk while Dan Patterson was getting more and more agitated by the minute, screaming orders at everyone. Colin, Jeff,

Comments

[kellypookie]

Aww, this was the cutest fic ever - I love the banter at the end, it made me smile :) Great work, you should post more!

[roseofpain84]

Thank you. ^^
I have one more thing I could post. We'll see.

[roseofpain84]

Thank you. :D I kept on daydreaming about that hug for ages before I sat down to write it.
Actually, I had no idea you weren't a native speaker when I read your fanfic (the nicotine one, i've yet to read the other one but i will)!

[rycolfan]

Hey you! Nice to see you posting here, and this is a lovely first fic. RyCol cuteness ftw! ^_^ The only little thing I would point out is you need to place your commas and periods inside your speech marks, rather than after, but other than that you did a great job. I've given you an author tag for you to use in future. Welcome to the comm! :)

[roseofpain84]

Thank you for the author tag. I hope I will actually get to use it more than once!
Ugh, punctuation. I hate punctuation.I actually googled it several times but I kept on finding several opinions about where comas should go in relation to the quotation marks. In the end I got frustrated and decided to go with what felt write to me. It seems it was the wrong option though! I'll keep it in mind for the next time.

[wickedground]

Ryan just loves his hoodie :D Yay, fanfic dedicated to me, I am feeling like a special snowflake right now.

[roseofpain84]

I still want that hoodie. Grrr.

[wickedground]

Remember you looking for it for hours? :D

[skkitle]

THIS IS SO SOFT