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Cameron/Sarah: Time Loop 47

Jan 09, 2010 20:50

Title: Time Loop 47 ( Read more... )

Comments 22

bsofthewest January 10 2010, 06:55:54 UTC

WOW, such fastpaced writing! I am exhausted! and during all this action,Cameron thinks about "hot after-combat-sex tonight" Too much!

wkgreen January 10 2010, 18:21:25 UTC

A cybernetic organism has to have her priorities! :) Thanks for reading and commenting!:)

gleekitten January 10 2010, 07:54:33 UTC

They are so badass ;)

"Cameron holds back a sigh as she catalogs all the damage her skin has taken today and concludes that she is not going to get hot after-combat-sex tonight. Or any sex for a couple of weeks while her skin regenerates, but having Sarah care for her damaged body, and then cuddle her all night is a nice reward in itself."

Agreed. Any time in bed with Sarah Connor is time well spent. *g* I'm rooting for them! Great fic!

wkgreen January 10 2010, 18:23:01 UTC

Thanks for reading and commenting! :) And yes, they are badass! :)

druidesswolf January 10 2010, 09:39:10 UTC

rock on! another loop and so soon after the last one. SWEET! I especially liked the description of how they fight together, how Cameron just rotates around Sarah...her own spinning shield of destruction. In my mind I saw the fluidity and grace of ballet at the same time her power as a machine. Very Ti Chi. And of course...."hot after-combat-sex" FTW! But it was Sarah's reflection in the end, the comparison to Sundance & Butch (very good movie)...how you never really saw how it ended, only how the end began. Excellent imagery! :D

wkgreen January 10 2010, 18:27:43 UTC

Thanks! Sundance & Butch is one of my favorite movies and the ending has always stuck with me. :)

storm_8 January 10 2010, 10:29:15 UTC

"Cameron holds back a sigh as she catalogs all the damage her skin has taken today and concludes that she is not going to get hot after-combat-sex tonight. Or any sex for a couple of weeks while her skin regenerates..." LOL, this one is the best line!!!

Brilliant as always! Hope there's more on the way.

wkgreen January 10 2010, 18:29:16 UTC

Hehe... it was an inspired line that jumped into my head and had to be used. :)

Thanks for reading and commenting. And more is on way. :)

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wkgreen January 10 2010, 18:39:39 UTC

Thanks! Yes it does seem almost impossible for them to make it. Sarah gains a sense of immortality through Cameron. Knowing that as long as Cameron survives, they will always be together.

Thanks for reading and commenting. :)