Cameron/Sarah: Time Loop 37

[wkgreen]

Title: Time Loop 37

Comments

[jen_sparks]

Simply awesome. Congrats.

[wkgreen]

Thanks :)

[bsofthewest]

Not only do you get it just right as far as the personalities and behaviors, but the tone of the words is rather robotic and suites the Cameron POV. Your time loops make me happy but ultimately sad that I can't get them any longer on the tube. You have to keep writing these loops for a long time.

[wkgreen]

Thank you very much. Thank all the excellent Fanfiction authors out there for doing such a good job, I get Sarah and Cameron's personalities and behaviors mainly from their work. I will do my best to keep writing them. :)

[freakykaethe]

That was very nice and very well written! I love your loops :D
Can't wait for the next one :)

[wkgreen]

thank you :)

[conbug]

I LOVE opening this site and finding there another Time Loop story, they are Def with in my top 3 story lines (only cos i cant decied which of the 3 i like more >VBG<)

I really enjoyed this loop, mostly because it was soooo different from all the other. the lack of trade mark very cool one liners surprisingly help make this story, it helped to create the sullen mode needed, enjoyed the fight with derek...

But LOVED the end as it's always great (and interesting) when Cameron tells Sarah she keeps coming back for her....

My last comment (of my OMG how long comment) Whens the next Loop out LOL...

[wkgreen]

Yay! I made top three! :) Thank you and glad you are enjoying them.

I am glad the sullen mood came out, I debated on how to handle that alot. :)

I love long comments and got the next Time Loop in mind already.

[tanama30]

i love this whole series. this part was emotional and intense. i love cameron's answer. heart felt great job

[wkgreen]

Thanks tanama. :)