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withthatfacade

of golden rings and heartbreak

Jul 13, 2007 15:45

Title: of golden rings and heartbreak
Author: withthatfacade
Fandom: Yu-Gi-Oh!
Rating: From G to PG-13
Disclaimer: Not mine. No money.
Warnings: A few naughty words here and there I suppose.
Notes: For 1sentence. This is my first foray into YGO! fic, so any concrit or suggestions would be appreciated. I think I might have some issues keeping all my canon facts straight ( Read more... )

1sentence, ryouxbakura, ygo!, fic

Comments 7

flamingly_fey July 13 2007, 20:25:04 UTC

My god, this was a wonderful nostalgia trip. ♥ It's been years since I read Yugioh fic... and I'm glad I read this. ♥ You've handled them so well....

withthatfacade July 15 2007, 22:25:55 UTC

Thank you!

flamingly_fey July 15 2007, 22:36:13 UTC

You're welcome. ♥

schizo_niko July 13 2007, 21:29:44 UTC

I was so excited to see this! I love YuGiOh and pretty much all of the pairings it generates. Loved all of these sentences, even though the ones describing their time apart broke my heart. ;_;

This is the most awesome line I've read in a long time: "Ryou thinks heaven would be boring; eternity without even a little sin here and there can't possibly be exciting"

So...much...WIN. <3

withthatfacade July 16 2007, 00:11:32 UTC

Thank you! That line was one of my favorites too. :)

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withthatfacade October 24 2007, 01:49:38 UTC

Thank you!

fennikusu_ai June 6 2009, 01:59:47 UTC

This is around two years too late, but I really enjoyed this as well as your writing. Ryou's such a lonely guy without Bakura. My favorites were #33 and #45.