Comments | withoutmaps: bandslash fic: who we were when

withoutmaps

bandslash fic: who we were when

Sep 03, 2007 11:40

Written for blows_to_come. Huge thanks to disarm_d for the beta.

who we were when
brendon/ryan
1378 wds

( Ryan lets out another long-suffering sigh and Brendon is done, over it )

the discos, not real obvs, brendon/ryan

Comments 15

the_rhimix September 3 2007, 19:12:35 UTC

YOU. ARE TOO WONDERFUL.

He pulls away, slowly allows Ryan to fall out of his mouth and the reaction is exactly what he is looking for.

“No, no, no.” Ryan tries to pull him back, tugs at Brendon’s hair just a little harder than necessary and whines softly.

Brendon hushes him and licks slowly up the underside of his cock. He’s trying to take his time, make it good, but Ryan is starting to twitch under his hands.

“Brendon.” He knows it’s supposed to be a warning, something deep and dark, but it just sounds desperate. With a smile, Brendon takes Ryan back into his mouth, takes in as much as he can.

He swallows, just once, and savors the tiny whimpers that escape Ryan.

“Please, Bren. Just.” He sucks harder then, swallows again. Ryan’s thigh begins to tense up underneath his palm and Brendon tightens his fingers around his leg and his cock both.

That got me. I are dead now, thanks. :)

withoutmaps September 3 2007, 19:25:41 UTC

Aw, thank you <33

I MAYBE LOVE IT WHEN RYAN IS TRYING TO BE IN CONTROL AND STUFF, BUT HE REALLY REALLY ISN'T.

the_rhimix September 3 2007, 19:59:19 UTC

I LOVE IT JUST AS MUCH AS YOU. GUH.

pau494 September 3 2007, 19:47:54 UTC

AWESOME! I APPROVE OF BRENDON'S METHODS! I bet Ryan acts bitchy all the time in order to get Brendon to blow him!

withoutmaps September 3 2007, 19:52:20 UTC

HE HAS LEARNED A VERY IMPORTANT LESSON. NAMELY THAT BEING A TOTAL BITCH = BRENDON BLOWJOBS. YES.

raveninthewind September 3 2007, 20:30:05 UTC

Oh, that was a hot first-time blowjob. :)

withoutmaps September 4 2007, 20:47:08 UTC

Thank you, Brendon's kind of a quick learner. :)

nyquil_love September 3 2007, 20:44:07 UTC

a clever cure for ryan's bitchiness...yay!
totally hot :D

withoutmaps September 4 2007, 20:47:42 UTC

Haha, Ryan has totally learned a valuable lesson. Thanks!

stoppedtherain September 5 2007, 08:24:25 UTC

Y'know... I don't even read in the p!atd fandom. Really. I just stumbled across blows_to_come, stumbled across this, and... damn. I may have to start reading in this fandom now, because this was just plain fucking hot. The dynamic with Ryan having all that anger and frustration, it being Brendon's first time, and Brendon still being in control somehow works perfectly.

withoutmaps September 5 2007, 18:25:56 UTC

Oh, thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed the dynamic and that it worked.

And yes, you should read p!atd!! It is awesome :D