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withoutchange

all for show

Sep 14, 2010 19:59

title: all for show
rating: pg-13
genre: romance
pairings: seohyun&yonghwa (goguma couple; sweet potato couple) / superminor!seohyun&kyuhyun

( 'just on the show.' she doesn't know if she is talking about yonghwa or kyuhyun anymore. )

pairing: seohyun/kyuhyun, snsd, cn blue, pairing: seohyun/yonghwa, #fanfic

Comments 27

Just like a guy ... ext_251824 September 16 2010, 11:11:17 UTC

"He touched her hair! I'm going to rip him apart!"

Sounds familiar. ;) No, seriously, I can very much feel for Yonghwa - she's away, surrounded by guys, one of them held her hand, and you're stuck at your own gig, can't see her and your imagination in running wild.

I especially liked the ending when he's reassured by "I miss you" - no accusatory rants coming from Yonghwa, just a "Good". Very well written, very much in character, I think. I can almost picture his satisfied grin. "She misses me." :)

Best regards,
Trent.

Re: Just like a guy ... withoutchange September 16 2010, 23:34:38 UTC

thank you very much!

i completely agree, and this comment made me all smiley. i try to get into yonghwa's head and seohyun's, but it is just all my imagination. thanks again though, i appreciate it<3

gauri92 September 16 2010, 17:05:37 UTC

this is amazing!!! they are just sooo sweet together!!!!
im really wondering what waits for them at the end of the show...
please write more soon!!!!

withoutchange September 16 2010, 23:37:28 UTC

me either. i really want the new episode.
thank youuu very much, please continue reading<333

cinnabun11 September 17 2010, 22:34:20 UTC

SO CUTE OMG
It's their shyness that's adorable and you captured it really well
good job ^^

withoutchange September 17 2010, 23:35:23 UTC

thaaank you very much! :D <3
much appreciated.

bollywoodrecord September 18 2010, 19:50:45 UTC

So... Who does she like?

withoutchange September 19 2010, 04:46:04 UTC

i would like to say yonghwaaaa.
yongseo ftw.

bollywoodrecord June 30 2011, 06:14:06 UTC

I was reading through your older stuff OMG WHAT A STUPID COMMENT /facepalm

I'm sorry. What I meant is that this was beautifully written and I love the YongSeo going on, even though I'm detecting sliiiight Kyuhyun love for her, but whatever. Not the point. This is amazing, and thank you for writing :D

forevermyworld September 19 2010, 05:31:23 UTC

hello hello! are you a yongseo addict too?! haha i love your fics they're always so funny & cute. lol and real(the way you got their personalities down). I liked the SeoKyu too! they're just so adorable! keep up the good work!

withoutchange September 19 2010, 16:58:39 UTC

yongseo isssss the best. seokyu .. is amazing.
i'm so indecisive it is ridic.

anyways thank you very much<3