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Ailaya's Pass Game 1

Mar 07, 2008 18:59

"Katie," Dee said. Katie jumped.
"Gossip tavels faster here than a run away horse," Katie grumbled wiping the tears away. "What do you need?"
"Katie," Dee said again, softly. "Jack meant no harm, he just told you the truth."
"Yes, about me being a whore and his version of a gun!" Katie spat. Dee looked shocked.
"Is that what he said?" She asked. "He ( Read more... )

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autumnsea March 8 2008, 05:57:01 UTC

The scene where Jack is trying to get out of bed to find her and explain is so endearing - I love it!

ailaya_believes March 8 2008, 08:06:46 UTC

Why thank you!
AJ

lostincandyrain March 10 2008, 16:57:26 UTC

I really like where you took this! I hope your school work lightens up soon.

ailaya_believes March 11 2008, 20:18:08 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it, and every one is doing a test that I took last year, so for this week I should be able to catch up. =D
AJ

ylycoyote March 10 2008, 20:59:42 UTC

School work comes first. You've given Katie and Jack another step along their way.

And on top that, we actually "see" some action from Jack. He has got something to live for after all.

Now....back to those books.....Katie & Jack, and all who sail with them are wishing you good grades.... :)

ailaya_believes March 11 2008, 20:19:37 UTC

Yayay, I'm glad that you liked it. And yes, school first!
=D
AJ