H5O fic: If I Should Stay

Feb 13, 2012 11:44

Title: If I Should Stay
Rating: G
Pairing: Steve/Danny
Spoilers: Coda for 2.15 Mai Ka Wa Kahiko
Warnings: None
Notes/Summary: For shoot_the_curl, for the prompt "I will always love you" by the great Whitney Houston. Danny takes his family home, and then goes home to his family. 800 or so words.

If I Should Stay )

h5o, fiction

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kare February 13 2012, 16:51:07 UTC
oh, just wonderful, Donna! You prompt made me tear up...guh.

What a lovely coda!

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withdiamonds February 13 2012, 20:25:19 UTC
The minute I saw the prompt, the story just wrote itself. I'm so glad you liked, it, thank you. ♥

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hammerhead22 February 13 2012, 16:58:50 UTC
Just lovely. I didn't get to see the episode but you were able to give me enough clues to figure out the important points without hitting me over the head. ♥

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withdiamonds February 15 2012, 18:44:07 UTC
Thanks so much, Steph. Fic that doesn't hit you over the head is a good thing!

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embroiderama February 13 2012, 17:38:29 UTC
Oh wow. I'm not sure I have words for this, but I have hearts: ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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withdiamonds February 15 2012, 18:44:33 UTC
Thank you! Hearts are awesome.

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ratherastory February 13 2012, 17:47:36 UTC
This is a lovely coda. Love how quiet it is, how you can feel the tension still thrumming through Danny right up until the very end.

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withdiamonds February 15 2012, 18:46:14 UTC
Thank you so much. He was going to feel tense until he got to Steve, for sure.

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withdiamonds February 15 2012, 18:46:58 UTC
Thank you!

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