LJ Idol Week 3: Fremdschamen

Dec 28, 2015 21:39


Definitely not my favourite thing I've ever written.  And it's late (so I think I'm disqualified from participating this round.)  But I wanted to post it anyway.

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My mother has a habit of starting every conversation as though we're in the middle of an argument. “Don't tell me you didn't mean for this to happen. Aah. Now what will we tell the ( Read more... )

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murielle December 29 2015, 11:26:49 UTC
Delightful! There's no cunning like a mother's cunning.

Wonderful little fable.

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kehlen December 29 2015, 15:52:22 UTC
The tie-in to the topic was a bit rough, but this is lovely regardless :)

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awakenyourfaith December 30 2015, 00:48:31 UTC
Nicely done story!

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eternal_ot December 30 2015, 11:21:29 UTC
Ha! I liked the twist in the end..Superb plot !

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whipchick December 30 2015, 16:02:11 UTC
Love how seductively this wound around the plot and then twisted at the end! The world seems really rich, too.

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