Viva Revenge, Part 11/? "Possession"

Feb 14, 2006 20:40

Title: Possession (Part 11/? of Viva Revenge)
Author: Thea Witchiepooh
Pairing/Characters: Draco/Hermione, Harry, Ron, Ginny, Mitchell Bulstrode, Pansy.
Rating: NC-17 (I got a bit carried away while writing this on my airplane ride home...I guess you could say the characters joined the "mile high" club.)
Disclaimer: Nope, I don't own Harry Potter or any of ( Read more... )

romance/humor, draco/hermione

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reetinkerbell February 15 2006, 02:42:10 UTC
Now that's what I like. :P I have to say, all the years of reading possessive!Spike and with the 'you're mine' etc etc, I have um, a small(ish) thing for um, that. :P I just love it. Just possessive enough to be sexy, and as its the heat of the moment while having sex, its not possessive enough to be creepy.

Also, "You're looking much... cockier... since we last met.". Haha. Love it.

Love it. Love it.

Can't wait for more.

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witchiepooh February 15 2006, 03:08:54 UTC
Hehe...glad you enjoyed it! I kept wondering if the man sitting next to me on the plane noticed what I was writing, lol.

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witchiepooh February 15 2006, 03:14:00 UTC
LOL, you know I hadn't been thinking "Vacation," but yes, that is surely an influence. As is my own family. I forgot to mention it in my A/N, but my dad used to always wake me and my siblings for family trips with the "Up and at 'em" line at like 4:30 in the morning!

And I'm glad you enjoyed the steamy part. It was pretty unexpected for me too!

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dirtsquirrel February 15 2006, 23:10:34 UTC
Ugh..That was great. I loved the ending line.

*huffs to self* I want a Draco like that! ;o)

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witchiepooh February 16 2006, 02:16:01 UTC
Thanks :) And yeah, I'd like a Draco like that too!

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izzzy88 February 16 2006, 01:12:43 UTC
Phew! Wow. Yes, that was positively delicious.... my hubby will be quite happy I read that, I can assure you :-D. I just had to comment, because this: "...making it quite the impressive bit of 'equipment,' suitable for both fanfic and porn." made me scare the pee-wine out of my cats because I laughed so loud, so hard! Everytime I think of it, I snicker heartily - I love it when people write really well and take their fics seriously, but I love it when people write really well and still have a little fun. So, yeah - thanks for the great story, the unexpected smut AND the belly laugh!

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witchiepooh February 16 2006, 02:21:57 UTC
Hehe thanks, I'm glad I could satisfy your reading needs :) I tend to tread the line when it comes to parody. I don't think that my fic falls into that realm, but I can't help but acknowledge some of the fanfic conventions from time to time. I'm glad it made you laugh!

And have fun with your hubby, just be sure not to yell out "Draco!" :p (Unless you're um, into that :p)

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misconstrue February 23 2006, 17:54:44 UTC
haha. I love that last line. very hot and very nice. can't wait for part 12!

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witchiepooh February 23 2006, 19:42:52 UTC
Thanks for the feedback! I'm glad you're hooked :)

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