Valhalla

[witchdollie]

She felt kind of bad. After all, her dear old nanny had been ever so doting and though she was getting on in years she still functioned admirably. Most families would have scrapped her and gotten in a new one. Well, that is what she did now, wasn't it. Scrapped the poor thing. She was a trifle haunted by the sad tone of her last hissing words just

Comments

[m_malcontent]

Really fine entry. Full immersion in a rich world in a short amount of space. Excellent.

[witchdollie]

Thanks. I have never written a steam-punk style story before. This was a good exercise for me.

[team_jessie]

Awesome story!

[witchdollie]

Thank you very much!

[myrna_bird]

Great use of the topic, above and below!

[witchdollie]

Thank you very much, my dear.

[resonant]

Very good!

Where will it be published?

[witchdollie]

Aha.. I don't plan on getting it published. This is just for fun. :)
Thank you very much, Sir!

[basric]

Interesting. I liked it. The old be careful what you wish for, what she wanted changed her world forever. Well done.