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witchann2

[Fanfic] Red West II. - Chapter thirty two

Aug 30, 2016 21:44

Title: RED WEST II.
Author: Kasumi
Rating: NC-17
Genre: Western, Drama, Romance
Warning: AKame pairing; vulgarisms, violence
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Comments 20

niigatachan September 1 2016, 10:04:28 UTC

DAMN! Dear you are A-M-A-Z-I-N-G ( ... )

witchann2 September 2 2016, 12:21:56 UTC

*blushing*
Thank you, dear. <3 ( ... )

niigatachan September 3 2016, 17:41:23 UTC

You are very welcome dear :*
It´s always pleasure be the first one in comments :D

Don´t blame yourself :D we love everything about this story :)

btw I´m going to ship Kuro and Ukushi :D and maybe one day there would be little hmmm horse :D :D :D pls dont mind me just imagining things:D

well you are right about Jin dear... well he is like that so he cant help himself :) maybe Kazuya will change him someday

xDDDD :D :D :D :D okay :D

witchann2 September 4 2016, 08:33:55 UTC

...thank you, dear, really.
Makes me happy to know that. ^^´

And you´re free to imagine whatever you like. ^^v

Hmm, I think that both Jin and Kame influence each other a lot. XD

atago4 September 2 2016, 03:34:27 UTC

Well, I almost ended with the first place al anyway, since it seems most of the usual readers are busy ( ... )

witchann2 September 2 2016, 12:31:13 UTC

Wow, that´s some comment you left here this time, almost ´mega-like´. XD ( ... )

atago4 September 5 2016, 03:24:55 UTC

Well, 'such good thing never lasts forever'... that's what we all know where your stories are concerned ~_^ But I certainly don't read RW so it could morph into some kind of telenovela, so I am looking forward to some action ( ... )

witchann2 September 6 2016, 07:18:33 UTC

You really don´t have to worry about the genre of RW - it IS romance, but there´s no way I´d be ever able to include Jin and Kame in some Esmeralda-like story. XD So yes, we´ll have some action soon, for a change.

History, historic characters… As I´ve already mentioned, I alter the known facts to make them fit the story better, but at the same time I don´t want to recreate them as complete OC. It´s difficult to find some balance in it, so… thanks. ^^´

As for ´issues´ between our main couple… it´s quite rare when they don´t have any. XD

And your favorites… Heh, a strong threesome then, good. :´D

seiko22 September 4 2016, 16:06:03 UTC

Thank you for the update! :P :P

witchann2 September 4 2016, 19:49:11 UTC

Baka ka?
^_^´

seiko22 September 7 2016, 15:57:35 UTC

:P
I so knew the vacation time will be over pretty soon...

I´m sorry for Jane´s and Jack´s family... Bad things happen all over again. :(

Koki´s reaction was hilarious. :) He is a great guy. But poor Jin, from now on he will have to deal with Koki´s teasing. XD
Sometimes Jin really should think first and then speak, but that´s the way he is, so it can´t be helped, rigt? ;)

Thank you once again! :)

witchann2 September 8 2016, 07:28:26 UTC

If they had the vacation for too long, my readers would get bored. :P :D
Sorry (not sorry?) for the bad things, but… They are the essential part of RW story as well…
Well, Koki, Koki, Koki… We KNOW him, right? XD
And JinJin… that´s right, he just is like that (and we love him for it), but that doesn´t mean he cannot… develop. XD

Thank you too, Nee-chan. <3
You were longer than usually this time. ^^v

pinkporca September 5 2016, 19:59:46 UTC

Loved this chapter. Especially the way you portrayed Koki. I was laughing at Jin's reaction when Koki teased him and called Kazuya "handsome". If it was a real setting, i would have loved to be a fly on the wall. Also, the way you wrote about the horses and their master. Took me a few sentences to figure it out that it was the two horses talking about their master riders. Well done!

witchann2 September 6 2016, 07:25:35 UTC

Oh, dear, thank you!
I enjoyed writing Koki in this part a lot, he really scored this time. XD
I hope that Kuro´s POV part was not too confusing… ^^´

Thanks for reading and commenting. <3

hilly_katara September 7 2016, 00:21:23 UTC

Your chapters ever evolving, and it's beautiful, had just finished reading the final chapters of Red West I when check was already this new chapter, I agree with the views of other readers this chapter was wonderful and fun, add scenes Kuro , humor Koki, discussion Akame but with a kiss of reconciliation, problem solved ( ... )

witchann2 September 7 2016, 11:07:09 UTC

Thank you for such a lovely praise, dear! <3 ( ... )

hilly_katara September 12 2016, 23:06:26 UTC

It was too long as a testament
I was excited with the story, it's good!!!!!!
I'll keep abreast of updates....
you put me to doubt, Jin and Kame still continue to have discussions in their relationship? Kame will listen to Koki? and I hope to read how this will solve.
It is difficult time to be open in their homosexual relationship, but I hope to be accepted by Leo, his brother, and friends, must be so because now they are family.
Thanks for answering!!!!!!

witchann2 September 13 2016, 10:48:06 UTC

It wasn´t long at all!
I loved it, sweetheart, really! <3
I´m so happy that my story made you so excited! :D
There´s not much time for me to write, but I´ll do my best, since you´re waiting. ^^´
Well, I advise you to keep your doubts, at least for some time…

No need to thank me in this case, if you find time for writing a comment, I should to the same. ^^v