New Numb3rs Fic: Formative Situations 1/1, by Fabella

Sep 11, 2005 21:41

Formative Situations
By Fabella (wistful_fever), R, Complete.
Numb3rs, Don/Charlie, non-explicit incest.

Summary
The moments that shape Don. Only one question was important. “Where’s Charlie?”

Disclaimer
These characters are definitely not mine. No money is exchanging hands from the creation of this story.

Notes
For the Worst Case ScenarioRead more... )

challenge answer, don/charlie, numb3rs, fanfiction

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neverbelonged September 12 2005, 04:12:32 UTC
/mumbles ( ... )

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pro_f_iler September 12 2005, 04:18:27 UTC
What a beautiful literary "triptych" of Don!Angst. I think I can die and go to heaven now. *g* I especially loved this line: "In Don’s line of work, he’d learned weapons weren’t optional." One must choose one's weapons well. I love that your Don knows exactly what would work.

Bravo!

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logovo September 12 2005, 04:59:55 UTC
This was wonderful. Truly. That thing about Charlie hating th ecold and then finding out what happened, how he almost died? Wow.

Great flow in the storytelling. It jumps in time but it never feels abrupt.

Don, very in character.

A real treat to read, thank you so very much.

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anonymous September 12 2005, 06:43:40 UTC
That was just . . . fucking *beautiful.*

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maubast September 12 2005, 06:55:37 UTC
Mmm good stuff!

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