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My Soul Is On Its Knees

Oct 28, 2011 03:19

Title: My Soul Is On Its Knees
Author Wishunew
Rating: NC-17
Warning: rape
Pairing/Focus: Jonghyun, OMC/Jinki
Summary: Sacrifices have been made.

requested by reinyuu. i hope this is okay? i rewrote it like, 7 different times, orz. it didn't turn out as violent as i wanted it too, either, Im sorry. I hope you enjoy?

( My back may be as straight as stone, but my soul is on its knees )

request, jonghyun, onew, nc-17, jongyu

Comments 33

wishunew October 28 2011, 07:21:09 UTC

spot for reinyuu

reinyuu October 28 2011, 10:55:57 UTC

oh my god....you finished it...
*bow* thank you so much...
and sorry for burden you so much that you should rewrite it for 7times >_<;;
*save page it first and now read *

reinyuu October 28 2011, 11:29:56 UTC

oh my god!!
i know it...you are really good for this case of fict..
thats why i told you to make me one...
eventhought it was out of my mind its really awesome..
i think that you will write something that just involved shinee and didnt include an oc in it..
but its ok..
it.really nice and heartbreaking ib same time..
thank.youuuu so much for making this <3<3<3<3

wishunew October 28 2011, 22:23:30 UTC

/by 7 i mean, its just a massive trial and error rewrite. and to be honest I did try and have it just be shinee. except it didn't feel... believable to me. I'm sorry.
I'm also sorry it took me like, 5 months to finish it. that was also a massive my bad. I'm glad you enjoyed this anyway. lol.
thanks for reading! ♥♥

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wishunew October 28 2011, 07:21:29 UTC

spot for manaphasm

wishunew October 28 2011, 07:21:50 UTC

spot for chireotamahome

wishunew October 28 2011, 07:22:19 UTC

spot for mimi_oly

jinkibumiminho October 28 2011, 07:52:45 UTC

We are sick, sick, people, aren't we?
But aside from the brutality (why do we let his happen to him?), the love that was forced through it was touching.

Excellent.

Now, when do we get an afternoon of take-out food and languorous love-making?

[edit from after I slept on it]
This story marinated into a plot bunny of my own. A dark plot bunny. Dammit, I'm supposed to be working on an angsty love scene and some hot smut. Not this new, malformed fluffy rodent!

wishunew October 28 2011, 22:32:18 UTC

wiched sick people. hands down. lol. I should probably write a silly jongyu smut fic to make up for this. something about America's fake Chinese food and New York City maybe. no. omg. i have ideas.

lol the plot bunnies in this comment. they're everywhere.
thanks for reading! ♥♥♥

volatileflame October 28 2011, 14:17:41 UTC

this broke my heart T^T

wishunew October 28 2011, 22:35:13 UTC

I'm sorry! /offers band-aid
hopefully the next one will be more light hearted
thanks for reading!!!!! ♥♥♥