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Aug 31, 2011 00:44

Title: Beginnings
Author Wishunew
Rating: NC-17
Pairing/Focus: Jonghyun/OC
Summary: My character from an AU kpop RP called Saving Seoul. Jonghyun is a 15 year old run away living by himself. he runs drugs for the Black Viper gang in hopes of working his way up into the gang. Unfortunately, he's pretty, and he's dependent on the dealers for his ( Read more... )

smut, jonghyun, saving seoul, nc-17

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wishunew August 31 2011, 04:44:35 UTC
spot for manaphasm

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manaphasm August 31 2011, 05:43:41 UTC
So, yeah, we sincerely hope this gets people interested in joining our rp. It's bucket loads of fun and the other players are all really awesome ^_^ plus, there are still TONS of spots open (I really need a Yunho to go with my Jaejoong so I can have awesome fun yunjae time *shamelessly promotes*). Either way, even if rp'ing isn't your thing, please enjoy the early makings of gang slut!jjong, lol.

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wishunew August 31 2011, 04:45:19 UTC

wishunew August 31 2011, 04:45:54 UTC
spot for mimi_oly

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linnhe September 2 2011, 13:01:20 UTC
Your smut is always excellent, every line is just right. I don't even know what to say, except I want a needy Jonghyun under the table rubbing his face against my dick~

I'm bad at roleplaying, but your community sounds lovely. I hope you attract lots of eloquent players bursting with creativity ♥

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wishunew September 2 2011, 19:23:59 UTC
i think i might be in love with you. do you know how depressed ive been because no one commented on this? OTL im such a comment whore and like, nothing with this story. im all self conscious, 'is it bad?' but then your here and your say such nice things about this and i love you.

thank you!

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linnhe September 2 2011, 23:31:04 UTC
I can relate very well, it's hard to remain confident about something if the response is tame. I've written things I thought were solid but then comments go 'this was nice, I guess' and I'm sitting there like 'ho shit'. I'm suspecting people are passing this up because of the original character?

All I can say is that it's a shame, the Jonghyun you've created is fascinating. I love his background story, I love the way he acts. When I first started reading this I thought the a/n said he was part of a bigger universe you created and I was anticipating reading more about him, but then it was a link to your community and my face went 'D:' haha

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wishunew September 3 2011, 02:51:30 UTC
possibly i will write more about him. a lot has happened to him, so there's a lot to write. I'll have to ask the players.

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shayvanwinkle September 2 2011, 21:04:10 UTC
jonghyun being all young and needy is really hot. and i like the idea of him whining beneath someone of the floor willing to hump their shoe he's so horny (ノ^ヮ^)ノ yay for slutty jonghyun!

p.s. i know what you mean, if i don't get a comment sometimes i get worried everyone secretly hates me and i delete whatever it is i posted. life of a writer OTL

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wishunew September 3 2011, 02:50:17 UTC
right? the shoe thing is my favorite lol.

right? ask my beta, for like 2 days i was going around like 'im not a bad writer, right? i mean, im not... right?' lol.

thank you for reading!

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