Tell Me You Love Me, the Deleted Scene

[wishunew]

Title: Tell Me You Love Me Chapter 10, Deleted Scene
Rating: NC-17
Pairing/Focus: Jongho
Summary: an extension of the sex scene from chapter 10, because my Beta manaphasm wanted it.
Disclaimer: Cuz i keep forgetting to do this, I Don't own Shinee.

Comments

[wishunew]

Spot for manaphasm

[manaphasm]

So, wishunew is osm for writing jongho to my high expectations. I LOVE jongho, almost as much as I love minkey and tofuho. It's one of my top 3 otp's, but I'm super particular about how I want it written, which means I suffer a significant lack of jongho in an already sort of jongho deprived fandom ;_; That being said, please enjoy this wonderful jongho, written the way I think it should, lol.

[wishunew]

spot for chireotamahome

[chireotamahome]

this was great. glad u shared. and I agreed that you put it in a separate chapter as this does not focus on onew.

like it!

[wishunew]

Glad you like it♥ lol.

it was good to write, i think. helped me hash out their characters and mannerisms some more. plus Manaphasm wouldnt let me not write this lol.

thanks for reading! ~♥~

[jinkibumiminho]

This is beautiful. I'm glad you cut it, because the focus of the story should be Jinki and how his tragedy affects the members, but I'm really glad you shared it. This is so inimate and real. Virgins with virgins is awkward and lovely at the same time.

[wishunew]

Yeah, i did feel like it would take away from the main focus of Tell Me. but I told manaphasm i was going to add a semi-sex scene as a way to break down Jinki and she jumped all over it. I'm glade you enjoyed it. First time sex should always be awkward, i think lol.♥

hey, so, you always comment on my writing, Do you want me to leave you a spot?

[jinkibumiminho]

Spot? For lil' ole me? {blushes}
Why thank you!

[shan_ah_non]

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it's so jonghyun of jonghyun for name calling <3

[wishunew]

keysmashing ♥♥

I thought that would be a nice quirk, he's such a tease irl.

thanks for reading!~♥~

[weaselbee]

<3 <3 <3 <3 <3
i LOVE how sassy you made jjong in this~ XD and i still love the rock/paper/scissors thing, that is hysterical. because it just seems like... they WOULD.
very hot, very nice, and very sweet at the end ~
“Jjong~” he whined, pressing his thighs together, “ugh, it’s so gross.”
and very realistic! (awkward thing to say, but i hate when people write about sex with these glorious, flowery adjectives like it's always perfect and isn't ever messy or embarrassing or awkward. if that makes sense)

[wishunew]

Right? they're both Virgins, they're not going to be porn stars who are well practiced in their sexing, lol.

thanks for reading! ~♥~