Originally posted at the porn battle
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Huh. I thought I'd written more than four fics. All those false starts, I suppose. All these characters are well over the age of 18. Phew.
["Unification," Firefly, Mal/Kaylee, NC-17, fireworks (in which our heroes win the day).]
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it's the first u-day in the history of mal that it's come to be evening and he's not yet found a tavern brawl to instigate )
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Nice job.
Particular "Hee!" to:
"I'm going to give you such fantastic sex that you completely forget about Meredith. I am going to give you Cristina-orgasms, which are, I promise you, much more long-lasting, satisfying, and high in fiber than Meredith-orgasms. I will give you orgasms that make open-heart surgary feel like a nice, long stroll on the beach. But first, you're going to have to sit up so I can finish taking off your clothes."
I also really like Buffy and Oz having gotten older and how they bump into each other and that clinging and the imperfection and just . . . it works, and it feels right.
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