[pre]porn w/o plot

[wired_lizard]

Or canon reference. Or much of anything except throwing three characters in a room together and seeing what happens. No particular spoilers for Utopia/Sound of Drums other than a particular character's existence. I don't normally write outside of canon, but I needed to get this out of my system, as the last few eps have been killing me with the

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[jadesfire101]

Wow

That was hardcore awesome. I love how the Master and the Doctor have totally opposite views on Jack's immortality. Where the Doctor goes "Wrong", the Master goes "Great!".

So very, very hot. I totally had a more insightful comment to make but I think all my thoughts evaporated due to the hotness.

I would love to read more of this!

[wired_lizard]

Eee, thank you! And, yeah, I think the Master's reaction would totally be, "hmm, freakishly symbolic and empowered human, let's own him, why don't we?"

To be honest, though, I'm unlikely to write more, as what I wanted to say was expressed here (mostly, really, this was an excuse to use the phrase "you can't fuck pi"), but thank you so much for the interest and comments! And welcome and hello!

omg an object in space

[nevacaruso]

Not to worry; you gave the Master quite a terrific voice here - gleeful and articulate and cruel all at once. His referring to Jack both as an object and a pet was chilling. (And, just as a wee aside, I love how both the Master and your Jack!muse refer to Ten as "my Doctor." Wheee.)

Re: omg an object in space

[wired_lizard]

.......I SO COULD NOT PASS UP THE FIREFLY REFERENCE.

Ahem. Yesh. I seem to be spawning a wee little Simms!Master muse. XD

The really chilling bit--didn't make it into the text though--is that, as far as the Master's concerned, he's complimenting Jack. Much more interesting and respectable to be a Time Lord's pet or an object in space than a mere human. (While in the meantime Jack's getting off on the objectification and counting on the Doctor to protect his limits.)

Jack and the Master are both very glad to have their Doctor, in very different ways. :D

[cktraveler]

... I will be in my bunk.

[wired_lizard]

My work here is done. XD

[stickmarionette]

OMG I LOVE YOU. And I so needed that after the Sound of Drums. (I assume you've seen it?)

My favourite line:

"But," says my Doctor, with a sort of pout he just has to be doing on purpose. "I don't like it when my brain itches."
Just so in character, and I can actually picture Tennant saying it (and pouting).

[wired_lizard]

YAY. And I so needed to write that after watching The Sound of Drums (which I did so with a whole couchful of hot squealing fangirls. Srs fun! I think it was about at the phonesex conversation by cellphone that the slashiness boiled over. And it doesn't help that Jack is acting like this Doctor's submissive in ways he never did with Nine.)

Gleee! Thank you very much!

[stickmarionette]

God, how many times have I watched that phone conversation? I believe we're rapidly approaching text. Hell, even SFX's review noted that there was 'twisted sexual tension' in the 'I like it when you say my name' line. And that's without mentioning the almost orgasmic note in Simm!Master's voice when he's asking the Doctor to describe how it felt to commit double genocide. (And dear God that's not a sentence I thought I'd ever type.)

You're so right about Jack. "I did it for you, as a tribute." Not only the line itself, but the way he looked at the Doctor as he said it. Wow.

[wired_lizard]

...I haven't yet, but that's just because I haven't had the chance. Oh, there will be much watching of phonesex. And--the whisper with which the Master greets him, the way he says "Doctor..."

...augh. I LOVE RUSTY AND HIS GAY AGENDA.

And, yeah--and not just that, little moments like his "Yes, sir," after the Doctor tells him to back him up in getting the key round the Master's neck...when he said that to Nine, it registered as mostly joking, but now...

And the Doctor isn't helping in how he's acting towards Jack. Grabbing his wrist and yanking him over when he needs to check the time? Aiii. It's clear that he's very aware of Martha's feelings and is deliberately teasing her and stringing her along--I'm pretty sure he's doing the same to Jack. Somebody needs to smack some sense into him.

[chainkill]

Further proof that I am a bad person: I only vaguely understood this story. I have a general idea what happened to Jack, because I've seen half of the first season of Torchwood and I saw the episode of Dr Who in which he came back, but I don't know enough about the master to know what's going on. I saw The Master once, ten years ago. (I am specifically downloading episodes he was in right now.)

Also, I have never read a Sherlock Holmes novel that contained Professor Moriarty (sp?), so I have no background with which to compare him other than the Sherlock Holmes episode of Star Trek: TNG. (Because The Master was supposed to be a similar foil to the doctor, apparently.

[wired_lizard]

You do not have to understand my random fic burblings to be a good person! XP (Which, admittedly, due to incomplete caffienation I nearly typed 'to be a fic person,' in which case, yes; but still!)

The Master, from what I've seen of him, is pretty much the Doctor's shadow, a trickster on a cosmic and often fatal scale, and with more than a bit of a control complex, as you might guess from his name. The current regeneration of the Master, John Simms, is...very, very fun. As silly and manic and cheerful as the current regeneration of the Doctor, but equally cruel and ruthless. The latest episode was terrific--and it doesn't help that everybody from the writer to the actors is hamming up the slashiness, because this is Rusty and his gay agenda.

But really, this fic was just an excuse to use the phrase 'you can't fuck pi' in conversation. :P

[chainkill]

I also don't understand the relationship with numbers. Usually, The Doctor is talking to a human who can't keep up with him, so I get the impression he dumbs it down a lot when he is explaining things. I have never seen him talking to another Time Lord, I don't understand how the numbers fit into their interaction. As much as I tell my students that math is the light and the way to understanding everything, I always kind of believed that the Time Lords succeeded in a system of science unreliant on math.

Also, I generally consider everyone to be a bad person for one reason or another. For example, at my college, the dining commons closed at 6pm. If you wanted to eat dinner at 6:30 or 7:00, then you were obviously a bad person.