Ghost Ray Thing, by Auburn, Due South

[auburnnothenna]

So, so, so ... I have no shame or this would never see the of a computer monitor except my own. Delete was invented for this story. But I like the damn ending, so here it is.

The Ghost Ray ThingNever, never in a billion years will this be finished - or rather filled in, since there is a beginning and an end. Just no middle. Insert your own

Comments

[anonymous]

I found it a good read even "unfinished". RayK and Fraser dialog spot on. I could visualize this all the way through, even sort of imagining a little bit of Ghost Ray, and Fraser solving the Bottrelle and other cases.

You write the characters so well, it'd be interesting to see how you developed their AU relationship in that missing middle. I know though, how hard it is to fill in the bridges once one has finished those scenes that were one's first impetus to write something.

Really, this isn't all that incomplete. The essential is there, although my knowledge of the show certainly helps. I liked it!

[liaison27]

Whoops, didn't mean to post twice. Tsk.

[auburnnothenna]

Oh, I don't know, it adds a certain emphasis ... Nice to hear the voices were right, at least.

[liaison27]

I found it a good read even "unfinished". RayK and Fraser dialog spot on. I could visualize this all the way through, even sort of imagining a little bit of Ghost Ray, and Fraser solving the Bottrelle and other cases.

You write the characters so well, it'd be interesting to see how you developed their AU relationship in that missing middle. I know though, how hard it is to fill in the bridges once one has finished those scenes that were one's first impetus to write something.

Really, this isn't all that incomplete. The essential is there, although my knowledge of the show certainly helps. I liked it!