Fic: At Full Speed (Higuain/Ronaldo)

[wintervixen86]

TITLE: At Full Speed
RATING: PG-13
SUMMARY: Gonzalo thinks that maybe they can get along in a ‘you pass to me, I pass to you, yay we scored’ kind of way. Or maybe they will hate each other in a ‘quit hogging the ball, you complete and utter dick’ kind of way.
FANDOM: Football (Higuain/Ronaldo)
STATUS: Complete - 2,326 words
DISCLAIMER: I do not own

Comments

[abitof_m0nkeys]

what?! this needs to be continued! i love the way you describe crispy, it's so on point. and not cliched in any way, or repetitive? just kind of eerily accurate. ugh, the ending is so great. it's probably not in your plans to continue this, but it'd be lovely! :]

[wintervixen86]

I've actually got another 10 or so messy pages laying around my hard drive that I want to finish at some stage. I just put this together in a neat little package for the challenge :)

Thanks for reading!

[sophie30]

ow isso é muito promissor,merece continuação.

[sashay_away]

“I’m not too sure,” Gago begins after they have had a couple of rounds, “but I think I just saw Ronaldo flirt with a girl, get caught out by her boyfriend, flirt with the boyfriend, and then walk away unscathed.”

Love it love it love it. so much.

[sparksfly7]

I love this :D There are so many parts that have me laughing ridiculously. the flirting with the girl and her boyfriend, the shoes-watch-belt-sunglasses matchy matchy, the "I don't know, someone normal". AND THE PORTUGUESE-SPEAKING CULT. THAT KILLED ME.

“You’re pretty to look at. Everything else would fall into place.” LOOOOOL. Oh Cris <3 (you should have mentioned his ass, just sayin') I love the way you characterized him, not sugar-coating any flaws, with his weird idiosyncrasies and magnetism and yet how hard-working and amazing he is. The word "excessive" is very Cristiano-esque :)

It's a shame hardly anybody writes Cris/Pipita. I hope there's going to be a sequel :D

[curgypsy]

I think this is the first Cris/Pipita I've ever read. I loved everything about this story.