[Nobuta wo Produce] The Morning After, Shuuji/Akira/Nobuta

Feb 07, 2007 22:03

I was sneaky, I was ninja, my suggestive selling got me over the line (haha, I rule) - I HAVE A JOB! NOW I'LL HAVE MONEY TO WASTE ON JE STUFF! :D

Title: The Morning After
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Akira/Shuuji/Nobuta
Summary: Akira waits patiently for Nobuta’s answer, eyes bright and as eager as a child presented with sweets.
Notes: This is the ( Read more... )

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asinful February 7 2007, 11:49:26 UTC
Whee! More NwP! That breakfast scene was just the cutest. And you even added Koji to the mix. :)

But what I like the most about this are all the little details you fit in there - Akira grabbing Shuji by the ankle, Nobuta's hair, Koji falling asleep at the table. Just so many little bits. They might not be what drives the plot, but I think those sort of things were a big part of what made the original series special. And you manage to maintain that canon feel. Well done. ♥

And congrats on the job! Retail me guesses? :)

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wintersjuly February 7 2007, 12:04:58 UTC
Koji's too cute not to mention. (But of course I couldn't figure out how to write him, so he stays mostly asleep :D)

Ahahaha, yeah you've noticed that I'm horrible at plot. I will have A plot for the Akira/Nobuta one, I swear! But thank you! Am muchly glad you liked. ♥

Nope! :D I'm going to be working in a call center. I sit on the computer all day and they'll pay me for it XD

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asinful February 7 2007, 12:17:56 UTC
You know, I honestly think that NwP universe is one of those rare occasions where you don't really need a plot as long as your fic has that certain atmosphere in it. I don't even know what to call it, but your fic has it (it's that little bit of spice that makes NwP into what it is). This fic was so sweet and subtle, it put a smile on my face when I read it. :)

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wintersjuly February 7 2007, 12:42:18 UTC
*blushes* Thank you! (I sound like a broken record, but I really mean it - your comments make me so happy :3)

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augustfai February 7 2007, 12:07:05 UTC
If this is your spam, PLEASE DO CONTINUE.

I loved it. That's all I can say. And I love how Nobuta was all, 'Home--feels like home', because I can imagine her saying it exactly like that. And the hair. =D

yay job!

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wintersjuly February 7 2007, 12:35:34 UTC
Ahahaha, you aren't sick of all the constant entries yet? Because oh god, spamming is so fun XDDD

Thank you! ♥ I'm really, really glad Nobuta worked since she's so damned hard to write and somehow I promised to write a whole fic full of her too *fails*

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madguitaristz February 7 2007, 12:45:32 UTC
sweet! in a family warm and fuzzy way. :D totally cute. thanks for the update!! write more!! continue!! I'll be reading!

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wintersjuly February 8 2007, 08:28:28 UTC
*sparkles* Thank you! ♥ Ahaha, I'll try to finish the other Nobuta fics I have, I will! I'll spam you all so bad that you'd write fic to get rid of me

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lia_blackstar February 7 2007, 13:02:12 UTC
Yay! I love fics with their little triad relationship =)
Aww... so cute and so in character for the bed scene lol.
~j

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wintersjuly February 8 2007, 08:29:34 UTC
*beams* Thank you! ♥ I love OT3 fics too, except I haven't found many in fandom yet. D:

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lia_blackstar February 8 2007, 09:38:00 UTC
Hehehe... I went to rec my bestie alita_b_angel this... and found out that you two are seperated at birth =P
=) Nobuta OT3 all the way ^^
~j

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wintersjuly February 8 2007, 09:45:05 UTC
Ahahahaha, we are too. Korete Destiny?

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kitsune714 February 7 2007, 14:02:16 UTC
wintersjuly February 8 2007, 08:34:45 UTC
I'm really wary about writing Nobuta fic in general. There's this balance you have to get, and if it's wrong, even a tiny, little bit, things sort of fly about, so I'm glad you liked. ♥

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