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[APH]Cracked

Jul 13, 2009 01:04

Title: Cracked
Author: Kanon
Genre: Romance/Angst
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: USUK (Mainly from Arthur's POV)
Disclaimer: If I owned Hetalia, I'd own the entire world. I don't.
Summary: Arthur had a cracked heart and he had put it away somewhere safe. But what was once cracked could always be cracked again; especially if it was by the same hand.
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rating:pg13, warning:character death, genre:angst, genre:romance, pairing:usuk/alarthur, fandom: axis power hetalia, category:oneshot

Comments 37

arieldm July 13 2009, 01:25:22 UTC

Absolutely amazing!

I loved how you described poor Arthur's heart, and Alfred's in the end.

And the fact this happened to. . .strike a nerve, as it were.

labymiro July 13 2009, 07:25:10 UTC

Thank you ~ ^^

arieldm July 13 2009, 15:51:00 UTC

You're very welcome~

blackcentury July 13 2009, 01:46:43 UTC

So

So...

I read this, I sit back and think.

My first thought is You just made me cry, I hate you

My second thought is Ef*** more please.

I other words, this is briliant. Never stop writing. And ouch, that hit. That really hit. And that you win.

labymiro July 13 2009, 07:25:56 UTC

...Um... Sorry...? *shot*

Glad you liked it, thx ~

blackcentury July 14 2009, 06:00:01 UTC

I guess what really got me is that, looking as if it's a real happening point of view, the really heartbreaking ending could have been avoided if America just took some time to dash a note and leave it by the bedside or something. But it's probably not something America thought about, I guess.

Naw, no need to be sorry. Be proud XD

Welcome~~~ and thank you for this excellent story

labymiro July 14 2009, 07:46:54 UTC

Yup. Al doesn't actually know about Arthur's fear since Arthur never really said anything so he just upped and left... ^^;;; Hopefully I won't kill Arthur again lol.

awww_applesauce July 13 2009, 01:53:21 UTC

; o; So...sad....Damit now I'm crying *whipes her tears* Arthur....;~;

labymiro July 13 2009, 07:26:44 UTC

*hands over tissue* mission achieved Yes... My 'torture my fav character' is returning, I think... Thx for commenting ~

awww_applesauce July 13 2009, 16:21:37 UTC

Damn you for making me cry ; ~; I kid,I kid,xD

Welcome! <3

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labymiro July 13 2009, 07:27:09 UTC

XD Thx ~

eyelushtraitor July 13 2009, 06:12:05 UTC

shit!!
you make me cry...
buhuuuuu...!! ARTHUR!! noooooooo. i___________________________i

it's beautifull,
but i'm feeling like to slap alfred right now

labymiro July 13 2009, 07:28:29 UTC

...*hands over tissue* there, there. I felt so bad while writing too. So sorry, Iggy.

Thx~