Orderly Madness, the Melody of Chaos #20: Exposed

[labymiro]

Orderly Madness, the Melody of Chaos [#20/?]
Chapter rating: PG
Chapter specific warning: None
Chapter specific spoiler: None

Chapter summary: Hitsugaya wakes up to the bitter reality.

Warning: Do you see ByaxRen? You might or might not.

Comments

[hu3long2]

Woohoo! Definitely ByaRen :-0 I love Rukia's breakdown moment and how the two men can't figure out how to comfort her, and then she joins all their hands together :-0 Actually, I liked that part of the fic best-- all the way to the visit to Ukitake, them noticing Ichigo, and Renji collapsing into sleep-- or is it just my ByaRen fetish? Also, I felt as if nothing much was happening with Ichigo and Toushirou, at least, until the very end, and now I can't wait to know how he figured out who the culprit was!

[labymiro]

ahahaha not biased, really. XP

yup, this was another general sorta thing instead of ichihitsu i guess... om is so plot-centred that i'mi failing to make ichihitsu-ness the centre in every fic. but don't worry... will see a lot of ichihitsu-ness soon enough i think... *grin*

[freyalilith]

WWAAAAAHHHH. Ah, can I say BYAREN MUCH!!! Talk about insinuation, 'perhaps it was safe for him to leave for his own room and crawl into the bed that was no match for the lush one he had grown used to'. HAHAHHAHA. Hell yeah!!!! So cute!

I hope Ichigo spends the next three days waiting hand and foot on poor Toshiro!!! Such a cute bf he is.

So glad you got the latest chapter up, can't wait for the next one!!! Keep up the great work!!!!!

[labymiro]

subtle subtle suble...NOT. XDD

well hopefully you'll soon get to see what happens... whenever i manage to get time... orz

thx for commenting!

[oskalaboska]

Oh no, its one of snowballs men. Well that might explain why he felt it was familiar last chappy. But unfortunately, it puts a dampen on the ichihitsu lovin. Darn. Plot or lovin. Plot or lovin. It hard to chose from.

[labymiro]

i'm glad that those little details were not missed! sometimes i wonder if there's too much gap in between or i'm too subtle. plot or loving. ah, the woes of life. XDD thx for commenting !

[labymiro]

lol... c'mon, you know you like cliffies. *shot*

thx for commenting!

[rasengan_gurl02]

Its a definite ByaRen! :D I dont know why but the image of Rukia bawling her eyes out amuses me ^__^ and Ichigo and Toshirou holding hands.....*sighs* :D

[labymiro]

eh image i had in my mind was rukia just... quietly sobbing but yeah, guess she is bawling her eyes out. rukia would've smacked you if she heard you saying that!! XD