Still shinig

[labymiro]

Title: Still shining
Author: Kanon
Genre: Romance/?Angst
Rating: PG-15
Pairing: TYL!18TYL!80? TYL!80TYL!18? Anyway, it’s TYL!Hibari Kyoya and TYL!Yamamoto Takeshi.
Disclaimer: Me owns no mafia, no rings, no money; nothing but the perversity of a fangirl.
Distribution: Fanfiction and LJ
Summary: Set in sometime in future but quite a bit before the TYL arc

Comments

[kasugai_gummie]

Nice, casual style. And a nice bouncing of Hibari and Yamamoto off of each other. Love the way you handled the TYL! character speculations in this piece. ♥

[labymiro]

Thanks you ^^

[tosshi]

Love this v.v. much. But you might wanna run things through a beta before you post them. There are some typos and places where it looks like half of a sentence got cut out. Nothing wrong with the writing, just stuff a quick read-through or two should find.

[labymiro]

It did go through a beta, it's probably when I was posting that things went wrong. My internet explorer's been... worse than cranky Kyoya to handle -_-;; Thought I had checked, obviously I was a lot more asleep than I thought I was...; Thanks for letting me know :)

Edit: Uh... Would you mind pointing out where? I just skimmed through and I can't see anywhere that's been cut off or anything...o.O;

[lyra_star]

Hey darling!! Great fic, and dont worry Yamamoto is not OOC! I loved him!

And oh yea, something i picked up on (the only typo i picked up on ok, i am horrible at betaing) is the thunder-guardian, while you were describing Gokudera.

Just thought i should let you know... But still GREAT FIC!

Loved it, there should be more 8018s in this world seriously!

WRITE MORE WRITE MORE!!!! I DEMAND MORE!!! PLEASE!!!!*puppy eyes*

♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ chu~

[labymiro]

*blushes* I don't know why but I keep typing thunder for Gokudera... *bangs head* Idiot. Thanks for letting me know and glad you liked it XD

[lyra_star]

Do you perhaps secretly even ship lambogokudera?? HMMMMM..... XD! maybe you should write a fic for them too! Will make me very happy... especially if its 20YL!Lambo and 14YO!Gokudera. kekekekekke!

Of course i LOVED it! XDDDD

[labymiro]

Hate to be rain on parade but Lambo's my least fav Guardian...-_-;;;; And I ship 8059!!! ...Or I think I do anyway. *sigh*

[milodrums]

Woaah nice fic :D

Do type more soon~~

[labymiro]

Thank you ^^

[ember_alda]

I don't think Yamamoto's OOC...I like how you portrayed his reactions in his first kill, it was very realistic. Hibari doesn't come off as too soft either, which is hard to do when mixing him up with any character from Reborn that isn't Kusakabe, Tsuna or Hibird. I like how you connected the two of them together, it's a really good fic ^__^

[labymiro]

Thank you ! It sounds I've managed to pull this off better than I had thought XD