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009 // Fanfiction > Oneshot > Gravitation

Jan 21, 2011 20:24

Title: Without Purpose
Fandom: Gravitation
Author: Raserei Hojo
Rating: PG
Words: 1,559
Summary: He used to be overworked, filled to the brim with responsibilities.
Note: Oneshot!

( Most days began at roughly five o’clock in the morning. )

fanfiction, fandom: gravitation, character: tohma seguchi

Comments 17

sandrock January 22 2011, 02:13:27 UTC

As always, you do such a good job of making this character real to me. I like the way you address all the various aspects of who he is as a person. Someone's boss, someone's husband, someone's friend... soon to be someone's father. But, of course, mostly it's his struggle that stands out. His coping with guilt, or lack thereof, is something that really stands out to me. It's one of the reasons I really like him ( ... )

blameshimself January 22 2011, 02:18:55 UTC

<------- But the IM window is that way

Thank you for long and thoughtful review, though.

no one saw that sandrock January 22 2011, 03:04:34 UTC

My IM window is this way ------->

♥

/saw it twice, plus a third blameshimself January 22 2011, 03:08:24 UTC

I see you are enjoying the icons of... the environment.

bitterblond January 22 2011, 03:01:33 UTC

brb crying FOREVER

blameshimself January 22 2011, 03:02:55 UTC

/looks at icon...

/looks at text...

/confounded....

bitterblond January 22 2011, 03:31:49 UTC

I have no crying icon, okay. It was the closest one I had to express my grief.

blameshimself January 22 2011, 03:33:16 UTC

/JUDGES

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