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Yamx: Defences (4/4) (Jack/Nine) [PG-13]

Jul 31, 2009 21:22

Title: Defences (4/4)
Author: yamx
Beta: the utterly fantastic wendymr
Challenge: Summer Holidays
Prompt group: 4: sleep - sleeplessness - dream - trance
Rating: PG-13 (no explicit smut, but plenty of innuendo; strong language, including the f-word)
Disclaimer: This is a work of fanfiction; the characters are the property of the BBC and used here without ( Read more... )

pair: jack/9th doctor, challenge: summer holidays, author: yamx, fanfic

Comments 11

adafrog August 1 2009, 02:01:58 UTC

Very cool, thanks.

yamx August 1 2009, 05:25:59 UTC

Thank you. :)

kholly August 1 2009, 02:48:58 UTC

Yea! Jack's idea saves the day and we can continue blissfully in a Nine/Jack, Rose universe. Nice job.

yamx August 1 2009, 05:28:11 UTC

*grins* Yep. I figured I couldn't stay in the happy space between TDD and bT too much longer, but Jack/Nine is what I want to write, so I decided to make sure they go on. *g*

yamx August 1 2009, 05:28:40 UTC

P.S.: Sorry, forgot to say thank you for commenting. :)

sahiya August 2 2009, 04:53:46 UTC

Well done with the avoidance of PotW - I, too, am thoroughly enjoying your Nine/Jack dynamic. Nine is all prickly edges, but Jack at this stage was all heart, once he shed the conman facade. They're really just beautiful together.

yamx August 2 2009, 07:37:10 UTC

Thank you! :) I loved their dynamic so much (even in canon where it was platonic), and we simply didn't get enough of it. (Not that I don't love Ten - I do. I just loved Nine, too. Ditto for TW!Jack - love him, but miss mortal!Jack.)

michelle_mercy August 2 2009, 11:22:34 UTC

I think this is my favourite of your series - so far.
And I like to know where this new timeline you've created will run.

yamx August 2 2009, 14:39:07 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

scifiangel September 17 2010, 01:05:48 UTC

Love this. Love how you fixed Parting of the Ways. Love how Jack and Rose won't let the Doctor brood.

One thing though. Your coding on chapter 4 is very off. It goes sideways instead of downward. Makes it very difficalt to read (but it's worth it.) You might want to see about fixing it.

yamx September 17 2010, 01:34:32 UTC

Thank you so much for telling me! I have no idea how that happened. I know it wasn't that way when I first posted it and I haven't edited it since. but then, I was using the RTF editor for posting back then, and that's notoriously unreliable. I've re-coded the whole thing in HTML and it should be okay now.

I'm glad you liked the ending. I enjoy this 'verse to much to let a few Daleks ruin it. ;)

Thanks for commenting!