Title: "On the Origin of Species"
Author: dameruth
Challenge: Infosharing
Characters: Ten/Jack
Series:
"Flowers"Rating: Adult
Spoilers: None, but part of an AU series.
Summary: Jack takes some time out to think about evolution and Time Lords.
Author's Notes: I've spent a lot of time thinking about the alternative Time Lord biology that's been
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I wish I had something more intelligent to say rather than NUGH... Unfortunately, that's what I've been reduced to.
You are brilliant. I'm going to tell you that repeatedly when I meet you in a little over a week. ;)
*mems*
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This was awesome :D
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Favorite lines:
He'd never seen a supernova up close, but he had a feeling he would if he ever commented aloud that he thought the Doctor was descended from omnivorous scavengers.
That earned him another glance from the Doctor: warm, controlling, affectionate; a Time Lord riding the triple high of knowledge, power and desire.
And, of course, the last line of the story. Brava!
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Heh, I've written a *lot* of stuff about how catlike the Doctor is, before; this is just the summation piece. Like Jack, whenever I try to put together the pieces, that's where I end up . . .
Thanks!
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And, sexy though the final scene is, I think I actually liked the beginning most: Jack's sheer pleasure and joy in having the Doctor trust him enough to sleep on top of him. Now that's truly a lovely image, and quite a reversal of what we normally find in stories where the Doctor and companion are in bed and one of them's asleep.
So, was this the story you mentioned to me a few days ago? Or is there another? If so, then the offer's still very much open!
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No, this isn't the aforementioned possible-beta item -- this is what I was working on as brain cleaner while finishing out *that* project. One segment of dialogue is still kicking my ass, but when I get it right, I'll ship it out to you. :)
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