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vail-kagami: Ornithology for Beginners (Jack/Ten) [PG]

Mar 07, 2009 01:56

Title: Ornithology for Beginners
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challenge: infosharing, pair: jack/10th doctor, fanfic, author: vail_kagami

Comments 24

ent_alter_ego March 8 2009, 06:13:00 UTC

My favorite part was the conversation about how it wasn't fun, and ending with the Doctor admitting he was aiming for another continent was perfect. This was lots of fun [if not for Jack ;)] and I'm impressed at how fast you wrote it.

vail_kagami March 10 2009, 19:58:33 UTC

Thank you! I wrote it in one night. It was nice to have something finished so fast.

supasass March 9 2009, 02:33:45 UTC

This line made me gigglesnort:

"Jack rolled his eyes and followed. Sometimes it really was tiring to travel with a guy whose butt was so skinny that he couldn’t bear sitting down even for a minute."

And I really liked the Doctor's explanation of how the Tardis works. A lovely story hun. xx

vail_kagami March 10 2009, 19:59:45 UTC

The bit about the TARDIS made sense to me, even though I only thought of it the moment I wrote it. It would explain a lot, though.

Thank you!

captain91 March 19 2009, 20:27:19 UTC

Sometimes it really was tiring to travel with a guy whose butt was so skinny that he couldn’t bear sitting down even for a minute. lmao... quite literally!

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vail_kagami April 2 2009, 23:05:20 UTC

Vielleicht lassen dich Jack und der Doc ja mittmachen, wenn sie miteinander vögeln. :P
Thank you!

kojote April 3 2009, 09:23:02 UTC

Das waere ja geil. :->

darthhellokitty April 2 2009, 05:49:31 UTC

This is WONDERFUL. I didn't know about the wrens... bad kitty!

vail_kagami April 2 2009, 23:06:33 UTC

Well, it's a cat. It does what cats do. It was even nice, and tried to share with its human.
Though I suppose that's no cosolation for the wrens.