vail-kagami: A Secret Flat in Cardiff, Part 3/3 (Jack/Ten, Gwen/Rhys) [PG-13]

[vail_kagami]

Title: A Secret Flat in Cardiff (3/3)
Author: vail_kagami 
Challenge: Domesticity
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers: Torchwood Series 2 Finale
Warnings: Slight creepiness on Jack's part, dark.
Summary: When Jack told her about he dangerous alien locked up in a special prison, this was not what Gwen had expected.

As far as Jack was concerned, the way back to Cardiff had

Comments

[templa_otmena]

Shit...

I honestly did not see that coming. What was most disturbing were Jack's thoughts on the Doctor being so open, making friends so easily and Gwen and Rhys' concern.

I don't know what was worse- the actual violence or the near passive enforcement of the Doctor's incarceration. It's all bad and from what I have learned pure and delicious vail_kagami :D

[echo_fangirl]

Oh. My. God. I did not see that coming. Not even a little bit. Holy crap. Wow.

[teastainedbird]

Whoa! They're both losing it now! D:

You did an awesome job on Jack's introspection here. It feel so much like him (in a desperate, half-insane way).

[hence_the_name]

I think this deserves a sequel. What happens when the Doctor discovers Jack has been drugging him?

Which is to say, this was very good and I'd love to keep reading. :) Dark!Jack isn't usually my cuppa (even when he's only moderately dark), but you write him so well. :)

[kizzykat]

Whoa, didn't see that coming. I think I just beat up the Jack in my own head for that, so now he's sulky and won't speak to me, but still.

Poor Doctor, he'll go ballistic when he finds out, he'll be so betrayed by the other, and he can't even kill Jack for revenge. Not that he would kill, but still.

[vail_kagami]

I can just imagine the look on his face when he finds out.
Who knows - he might go crazy on Jack and kill him anyway.Not likely, but you never know.