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vail-kagami: A Secret Flat in Cardiff, Part 2/3 (Jack/Ten, Gwen/Rhys) [PG-13]

Jan 20, 2009 22:15

Title: A Secret Flat in Cardiff (2/3)
Author: vail_kagami
Challenge: Domesticity
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers: Torchwood Series 2 Finale
Warnings: None
Summary: When Jack told her about he dangerous alien locked up in a special prison, this was not what Gwen had expected.

( “I suppose I should untie you,” he offered. )

pair: jack/10th doctor, fanfic, challenge: domesticity, author: vail_kagami

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sahiya January 21 2009, 06:03:38 UTC

Oooh, very interesting. Can't wait for the conclusion!

teastainedbird January 21 2009, 14:23:21 UTC

Yay! I was so happy to see another chapter of this up already! :D
Such an intriguing and original story! We rarely get to see Rhys in action.

templa_otmena January 21 2009, 22:43:46 UTC

All new mystery, hurt/comfort, angsty fic with great POVs and the Doctor tied to a bed. Brilliant :D

Looking forward to reading more.

Thank-you for sharing xXx

nightrider101 January 25 2009, 18:24:35 UTC

Another great chapter!

I really like Rhys in this. He's a character that doesn't get a lot of attention or respect. In this story, he's a normal guy who's been put in an extraordinary situation, and he's handling it quite well.

It's hard to see the Doctor in this condition. I only hope he'll recover and be his world saving self soon!

The Doctor watched him for a while, an amazed grin on his face.

“You can cook,” he observed. “Like, really cook! That’s brilliant!”

Awww. You write the Doctor so well! It's those few lines of dialogue that add so much to a story.

Spelling check at the end: Five hours later Rhys for the twentieth time this evening checked up on the Doctor, who was tied to the bad again Bed?

As always, thank you so much for sharing! I can't wait to see the conclusion!

vail_kagami January 25 2009, 19:44:27 UTC

No, that's not a typo. The Doctor is always tied to the bad in my stories. Doctor + Bad = OTP!
...
Okay, I'll correct it.

Thanks for the comment! I like Rhys for being normal.

nightrider101 January 26 2009, 02:16:48 UTC

Loving the story! But you might kill me with the wait for the final installment ....... I'm dying to find out what is really going on!

vail_kagami January 26 2009, 02:43:47 UTC

No need to die. The next part is finished and will be posted as soon as I find the energy to proofread it.

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dock_leaf February 3 2009, 11:19:01 UTC

Eeek! And how much do I love Rhys? You'll note I carried on with reading this instead of writing up my work? Yes, thought so. I'm going to read the next bit too!