rubychan05: And So I Fall Into The Blackness Of Death (Ten/Jack) [PG-13]

[rubychan05]

Title: And So I Fall Into The Blackness Of Death
Author:  rubychan05
Challenge: Plague
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers:  All New Who. No major TW.
Warnings:  Mentions of blood, death, and other pleasant things that come with the plague. ^_^
Summary: It's the Black Death. And Jack's not happy.

And So I Fall Into The Blackness Of Death

The first time he

Comments

[ivy_b]

OMG did Jack cause the Black Death to spread? NOOOOOO!!! Poor Jack!

This was so terrible it was amazing. First you've mentioned Jack the Time Agent background on the subject, tied it in with Torchwood cannon and then supplied my Master/Jack kink. What a cruel and sadistic experience and I loved the Doctor and Jack's talk, it felt right.

Then Jack accidently killed every living human on earth, including his team mates. That image of him holding Gwen and Ianto's (unless he talks, how do we automatically know he's Welsh?) dead bodies. That broken look. OMG! This took my heart and shredded it to a million pieces. I need some major comfort fic after that!

[rubychan05]

Well, we all know Ianto just looks Welsh. ^_^

Believe it or not, this started out much happier..and somewhere along the line turned into Jack tortue. Oh well. We hurt the ones we love!

Thanks for the wonderful comment, and I might actually try to write some comfort fic next to make myself feel better!

[rubychan05]

Yeah, Jack seems to get it bad, doesn't he? Poor thing. We abuse him too much!

Thanks for commenting!

[nightrider101]

Wow. I think you've broken my heart. *pokes at broken heart*

This was some serious angst fic here. You wrote it beautifully. *goes off in search of comfort fic*

Thanks for sharing!

[rubychan05]

*hands over superglue for the broken heart*

Thanks for that lovely comment! Sorry if I broke your heart, I'll pay for any and all damages ^_^

I might go off and write some comfort fic now....I feel horrible!

[ladysarahii]

Wow, this hurt.

But it was incredibly well written. Excellent work! And now I am going to find some crack!fic to feel better. ;)

[rubychan05]

Ah, the crack. Mother of all things light and good. One day maybe I, too, will make my way out of Angst Land.

Thanks for commenting - it's always a relief to hear that other people like my writing!

[garrideb]

Beautiful, beautiful writing and spine-tingling story. Just... wow.

[rubychan05]

Thanks! It's great to know people like reading the stuff that pops out of my crazy mind!

Glad you enjoyed!