sahiya: A Bubble in Time (Jack/Eleven) [G] (SUMMER HOLIDAYS PROMPT 12)

[trobadora]

Title: A Bubble in Time
Author: sahiya
Pairing: Jack/Eleven(ish)
Rating: G
Spoilers/warnings: None
Summary: Being caught in a time bubble is boring. Fortunately for the Doctor, Jack knows when to be in the right place at the right time.
A/N: Thanks to yamx for the beta!
Prompt 12: 55, Emerald, The Holy Orb of Andrix; The Great Partitioning

Comments

[joking]

Oooh. I really like this concept of Jack convincing the Doctor to stay and deal with the aftermath for once in his life.

You also did a good job capturing Eleven, like when he randomly shows up in Jack's bed with totally innocent intent, and the thing not being very plan-like!

[ext_1198415]

Jack did a good thing for the displaced people and the Doctor convincing him to take the slow path and do more for those he rescues than emergency care excellent!

[hedda62]

The universe would probably never be the same, but the Doctor didn’t see how that was necessarily a bad thing. Yes, indeed! Great concept well-executed, and I do love how you write Eleven. :)

[mycatsellsclues]

This was very sweet and I enjoyed it immensely. Thank you!

[arnica]

I really liked this. It's a great story.