dameruth: "Glass Houses" (Ten/Jack) [PG]

[dameruth]

Title: "Glass Houses"
Author: dameruth
Challenge: "Crossing the Lines"
Rating: PG
Spoilers/warnings: Slight ones for S1 of "Torchwood," I guess.
Summary: Ianto finds out something unexpected and unwelcome about Jack's personal life.

EDIT -- decided to bump this one up to a PG, after due consideration.  Maybe it needs it, maybe it don't.

A/N - For some

Comments

[dameruth]

I'd love to see Owen's POV -- that would be really fascinating! Glad you liked this little extrapolation. Thanks. :)

[donutsweeper]

Oooh, I like this look at the Doctor and Jack's relationship through Ianto's eyes. Especially the comment about Jack being the Doctor's second.

[dameruth]

I'd say the "second" aspect of the Doc/Jack relationship was made really clear in "Utopia" (and the rest of the season finale), and it really allows parallels to be drawn with Jack/Ianto, which I liked, thematically. Thanks!

[trobadora]

Wow, this is cool. I love outsider POV, and this is a great look at Doctor/Jack - absolutely lovely.

[dameruth]

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed -- and I like writing Ianto, so this was fun for me, too. :)

[mizzmeow]

I really enjoyed this. And I think you got all three of them characterized perfectly!

[dameruth]

Thanks -- glad you thought they were accurate depictions. I was a little worried that Ianto was being slightly doofus, but then, he wasn't thinking clearly, and I hoped that'd come through. :)

[garrideb]

Awesome fic. You have wonderful command of the flow of this story - it felt intense and fast-paced but managed to give all of these beautiful details, such as Ianto noticing the Doctor's beard shadow and freckles. I also loved that I had no clue if Ianto would actually shoot the Doctor.