GIFT FOR SQUAREDEDDIE: Of Maps and Constellations (7th Doctor+Jack) [PG]

[trobadora]

Title: Of Maps and Constellations
Author: mahmfic
Recipient: squarededdie
Rating: PG
Pairing(s): 7th Doctor+Jack, Ace
Spoilers/warnings: Minor references of Torchwood.
Summary: Jack Harkness is the sheriff of a town doesn't exist on any map.

Comments

[navaan]

This was brillant! You really captured the voices of that particular Doctor and Ace. I could really hear them while I was reading. And nice use of Ace's special nickname for the Doctor till that final moment there. That was really fun. :)

[fortisgreen]

now there's a pairing I didn't expect! Well done!

[squarededdie]

My grin kept on becoming wider and wider reading this. It was like opening one of those birthday presents that are wrapped up in multiple layers of wrapping and find something fascinating in each pealed layer. Even becoming town sheriff doesn't stop people from calling Jack 'Captain'! Ha ha! I am overjoyed that you chose the 7th Doctor and Ace...your words illustrated them brilliantly. The little banters they exchanged were gold...aww. The detail you weaved in to establish the location/situation of the events was great as well as astonishing because I too work especially hard on those aspects of a story...the characters are important but they won't be able to even exist if there is no place for them to set foot on and tango...thank you so much for such a wonderful story...gonna go back to the top to read it again!

[sahiya]

Seven is my favorite classic Doctor, and I was so happy to see him here! You really did a nice job with him and Ace. Loved this!

[wojelah]

So first: SEVEN. ACE. RUM AND COKE JUST COKE JUST LEMONADE. I think I am dead of glee. And Jack! In the Old West! And taking care of timelines - oh. I cannot even. It's so plausible, and such a Jackish trajectory, and I wish I had the fic where he first came to town and brought it to order. And that ending - I love it. Thank you so very much!