Fic: Guilty Until Proven Innocent 1/?. Hisagi/Kira.

Jan 18, 2009 22:53

Title: Guilty Until Proven Innocent 1/?
Author: winteraconite
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Hisagi Shuuhei/Kira Izuru, some Hisagi/Matsumoto action and a bit of Ikkaku/Kira but only if you want to see them as such
Notes/Warnings: For bliriel who wondered what happened to Izuru right after Gin left. Mild angst. Spoilers for the Soul Society Arc. Written for theme #15: hold ( Read more... )

yaoi, shuukira, 50scenes: kira izuru, bleach fanfiction

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xxlanaxx January 18 2009, 16:51:20 UTC
this is a really beautiful piece, yumichika would be proud lol.

ne seriously this was great

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winteraconite January 19 2009, 13:32:59 UTC
I'm really, really glad you think so. I milked myself for all I'm worth worked just a wittle, itty bit harder on this than most of my fics.

Thank you for reading and commenting! ♥

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barukode January 18 2009, 17:43:46 UTC
Oooh, Antha ( ... )

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winteraconite January 19 2009, 13:40:27 UTC
OH, SARAH! It's been too long since I saw you on LJ and really, you are like instant-happiness-just-add-water for me! ♥

Re: Shuu's speech pattern. ::cringe:: Okay, that was unintentional, though, I did notice that at some point but didn't really dwell on it. Shuu as I see him in my head is...I don't know..regal in a grunge kind of way? I see him as the type to go "what's all this then?!" as opposed to "what the fuck?!". But I think Kubo means for him to be the latter since that's how he is shown in the omakes. So my brain gets all confused and makes mistakes like these ones right here. XD But you know, it is too awesome that you actually liked that bit? Seriously. Awesome. I ♥ you ( ... )

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letainajup January 18 2009, 18:01:36 UTC
GASP it is true I thought the same after the Aizen situation! I thought something like that, wouldn't they think that of Kira?! OMG your interpretation was so sad and yet beautifully done. I like how it started with Hisagi and Ran, but then moved to Kira ;__; I was so sad seeing how he wouldn't let go of Kira's hand! Noooooooo and then how other lieutenants played a role too, like Ikkaku!

Again I am happy to see more writings from you, I thank you and wish you luck with midterms!!

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winteraconite January 19 2009, 13:44:13 UTC
Yes, there is no way they could have let him get away with what he did. I imagine someone must have helped his arse out immensely if he got out of it alive. ::thinks about if for sequel (if any)::

I'm so glad the emotion got through to you; I was afraid this would bomb. And I'm glad you noticed the role the other lieutenant's played! I always wanted to give these guys the camaraderie and friendship they don't sho a lot in the manga or anime (except of course the one between Shuuhei and Izuru. And people wonder how I matched these two up. XD)

Thank you for reading and commenting! And thank you for wishing me luck for my midterms! Believe me when I say that I will most definitely need it! XD ♥

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calm_isolation January 18 2009, 18:08:36 UTC
<3<3<3

Beautiful!!!!!

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winteraconite January 19 2009, 13:44:50 UTC
Lol. Glad ya think so, Meg! ♥

Thank you for reading and commenting!

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kwansan January 19 2009, 04:45:12 UTC
Absolutely loved it.
I like the way you portrayed the relationship between Hisagi and Kira. Very deep with very few words. If you ever do think of a way to continue this, I'm definitely looking forward to it XD

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winteraconite January 19 2009, 13:45:51 UTC
Am really glad you did. And I just might (continue it). You'll see it around if ever I do, I hope. ^^

Also...awesome icon! ♥

Thank you for reading and commenting! ♥

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