Fic: Static (4/?). Hisagi/Kira.
Title: Static (4/?)
Author: winteraconite
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Hisagi Shuuhei/Kira Izuru, mentions of Iba/Nanao
Notes/Warnings: Yaoi. Violence.
General Summary: Betrayal is a blade that cuts deep, and you have to wonder who you can really trust.
Disclaimer: I do not own Bleach or any of its sexy characters. I just borrow them and make them do my nasty bidding ( Read more... )
Author: winteraconite
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Hisagi Shuuhei/Kira Izuru, mentions of Iba/Nanao
Notes/Warnings: Yaoi. Violence.
General Summary: Betrayal is a blade that cuts deep, and you have to wonder who you can really trust.
Disclaimer: I do not own Bleach or any of its sexy characters. I just borrow them and make them do my nasty bidding ( Read more... )
Comments 7
Darn it Antha!!! No more SKIRT for you until we find out how our boy is! And how Shuuhei's going to react to this!
Izuruuu ;_______;
All that aside, this was a wonderful chapter! The swapping between Shuuhei and Izuru's scenes was annoying only because of all your little cliffhangers. Every time the scene swapped I would "ARGH, NO!" but then become engrossed in the next seat and repeat. Definitely a fine way to keep your audience!
The appearance of the hollows was ... *_______*
Let's not get too much into that or I'll start throwing things again. But it was great.
Adoring Iba's appearances in your fics, there's not much of him out there, plus Renji's usually the third wheel in these scenarios and change is good.
Now I repeat; NO MORE SKIRT UNTIL I KNOW IZURU'S OKAY! XP
So by all means don't stress and take your time with the next chapter >=]
(In all honesty though, was thrilled to see a new chapter for Static! Hope your muse gets its butt into gear for more multi-chap goodness soon!)
/end super long
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D:
You sure know how to hit 'em where it hurts!!!! >.<
*dodges projectiles*
YEY YOU ACTUALLY LIKED THIS CHAPTER! XD
The transition from one scene to the other was difficult for me this time because this writer's block just won't let me get my groove on! Would you believe the scenes with Izuru and Rangiku--with all its detail, fighting scenes, and important dialogue--all but flowed out of me while Shuu and Iba had me fumbling and failing with the dialogue?! At some point I was just about ready not to include them in this at all! I just didn't feel it! Stupid writer's block...
I'm so happy you liked my Iba here. I figured he was in more of a position to talk some sense into Shuuhei than Renji was. I mean Renji calls Shuu "Hisagi-san", for crying out loud! I can't imagine him being the one to tell Shuu off of call him on what was going on between him and Izuru ( ... )
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My gosh, my eyes didn't want to finish reading through the Hollow scene because I just knew it wasn't going to end well. Kira can't be really gone, can he? T___T *in denial*
Poor Shuuhei. I've wanted to slap him silly after the past chapters, but now this. THIS. I wonder how he'll react.
Iba was an amusing touch, though.
But LKJDSA I cannot wait for the next chapter.
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The Hollow scene was kind of hard to put together; there were so many things happening at the same time. It was supposed to keep you on the edge of your seat so that you didn't want to finish it is a good thing (but I'm glad you finished it haha)!
Gosh, I've been neglecting this story. Your comment sort of made me go O_O when I realized I'd been slacking off on this...again... WILL GET BACK ON THAT NEXT CHAPTER NOW I SWEAR!!!!
Thanks for reading and commenting! ♥
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this fic made me absolutely fall in love with the shuukira pairing. it's so well written!
...okay now i'm feeling weird for posting a comment so much later than everyone. *cowers in just-registered-on-LJ-awkwardness* i couldn't resist! :O
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But hey, thank you for commenting! I'm glad you like this fic. It's kind of my baby. ^^
I'll slave away on the next chapter as soon as semestral break comes along...in October. I hope you don't lose interest before then. XD
Thank you for reading and commenting!
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