Fic: Stop the World. Hisagi/Kira.

[winteraconite]

Title: Stop the World
Author: winteraconite
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Hisagi Shuuhei+Kira Izuru
Notes/Warnings: ANGST LIKE WHOA. Hisagi's POV. Written in response to Bleach Chapter 392 (Why, KT?! WHY?!) and for Theme #008: Liar @ 50scenes. This fic is parallel to ceestar's Re: 392. SPOILERS for Chapter 392.
Disclaimer: I do not own Bleach or any of its sexy characters. I just

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[mako_pretty]

“It’s gonna be all right,” I told him.

“It’s gonna be all right,” I lied.

I won't lie, I teared up a little at that. Poor Kira.

[winteraconite]

Awwww *huggles*

Cheer up! You know KT won't snuff these two out...not if he knows what's good for him!

But I'm glad the emotion got through to you! Those last two lines were the most critical and I basically threw everything I had into them. :D

Thank you for reading and commenting, Misu! NOW KEEP YOUR FINGERS CROSSED AND HOPE OUR BOYS LIVE!!!!!

[mako_pretty]

MY FINGERS ARE TOTALLY CROSSED!

[biodamper]

That was sad :'( Nice fic!

At least the latest chapters in Bleach will provide us with more angst fodder, lol...

[winteraconite]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

And yeah, plot-wise, the chapter was rather amazing if a little predicable. But still...KT hurt my boys. Totally gonna hate on him until he makes them better again.

Thank you for reading and commenting!

[reasonfalling]

WAH!!!!!!!! *Is extremely happy* I'm so happy to read something from you~~~~ *dies*

God... that chapter made me O.O Omg, Toshiro!!!!

Wah~ that ending... I'm freaking crying and I never cry. Even if it was only one or two drops.

I'm pretty sure they'll be okay...

[winteraconite]

Actually, plot-wise, the chapter was kind of amazing, if a little predictable. I'm just pissed he had to hurt Izuru. They're going to be okay, yeah, I'm sure but I was totally waiting for him to get a little action and now it looks like he's going to be down for the count for a while. Just when he finally showed up again, too! DARN YOU, KUBO!!!

I'm glad you liked the ending! I had a hard time trying to think of the right ending for this. It was rushed and I was kind of distraught over the latest chapter so my brain cells weren't very cooperative. And YES BWAHAHAHA YOU CRIED! I'm glad the emotion got through to you!

Thank you for reading and commenting! ♥

[ceestar]

*huggles them both*

Ooh Antha I adore the way you explained Shuuhei's feelings in this fic, you explain how he's feeling emotionally and physically, it was just so ... >___<

This was a pain I couldn’t endure. “God damn it, Kira, wake up.”

;________________;

Curse you, Kubo!!!

[winteraconite]

LOL! Shuuhei's feelings were in reflection to my own. I was asking myself how I would feel if I were in his place and...lol. There ya go! XD

I'm actually really glad I didn't make this an all-out ShuuKira fic. That they're only friends makes it more delicate, more real, and somehow more painful.

I still want to tear Kubo limb from limb even though I'm pretty sure our boys are going to be fine. I just...GAH! Bring 'em back into the story only to do that to them! How cruel!

But anyway, let's not start ranting (again). Thank you for reading and commenting, Cee! ♥

[kwansan]

“It’s gonna be all right,” I lied.

Don't break my heart even more than Kubo already has!! T___T I think this is the first chapter where I really teared up as I was reading. And then I got to the end and they had the message about how next week will be a hiatus. I nearly had a panic attack.

I love how you've written this from Shuuhei's POV even though he wasn't even shown in this chapter.

[winteraconite]

I AM ONLY SHARING MY PAIN!!!!!!! But lol, sorry about your heart. Here, let me fix it! *chases after you with tape*

This chapter was actually amazing plot-wise even if it was a little predictable (like, I knew something was up and that they were all going to explode into bloody messes mid-air but I did NOT expect for Hinamori to be...yeah). It was just...painful. Gah. Kubo just had to pick on Izuru. X.x

And lol yeah, I doubt we'll be seeing Shuu doing this but you know how I can't help but stick a little ShuuKira somewhere, even if it's only friendship (which, in this case) turned out to be better than if they were in an actual relationship).

I seriously can't wait for the next chapter, though.

Thank you for reading and commenting! ♥