Fic: Static (1/?). Hisagi/Kira.

[winteraconite]

Title: Static (1/?)
Author: winteraconite
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Hisagi Shuuhei/Kira Izuru
Notes/Warnings: Yaoi. This one goes out to barukode and keleosnoonna who requested it here and, of course, to my dearest Harmony of silverharmony. (Belated) Happy birthday, Harmony!!!!!!!!!!! Also, written for Theme #1: Uniform @ 7snogs.
Summary: After the betrayal Hisagi and Kira come to terms with themselves

Comments

[echoinautumn]

*gapes*

Antha, every time I read anything you write with these two, I'm always left absolutely floored. I can't wait for the next part of this, and I absolutely love the way you handle their teamwork and friendship, and the subtle hints of everything littered around... and... and... *flail* This is just so wonderful! ♥

[winteraconite]

::blushes madly:: Ama, you are much too kind. ♥

I'm so glad you like it! Thank you for reading and commenting! <3333333

[silverharmony]

“We shouldn’t,” Hisagi said gently.

AFJHSKDHASLKS *SMACKS HIM* I don't blame Kira! D: I hope things'll work out though - I still feel sorry for Shuuhei being given the cold shoulder even though he kinda dug that grave himself. xDDD It's always work/duties with them, isn't it?

Just one thing though - I think in the first sentence it's meant to be Kazeshini, not Kazenishi? Don't worry though, my mind sometimes goes blank and I make typos like that all the time. XD

THANK YOU SO MUCH ANTHA MY DARLING. <333 I really didn't deserve this two years in a row and seriously you don't have to organize this for next year XDDD ILU2 BB ♥♥ I'm so grateful to have youuuu ;____;

[winteraconite]

I KNOW, RIGHT?! ::beats Shuu up:: He did dig that grave himself, though, I admit Kira's being a wee bit of a drama queen. XD

And blergh. Yes, I edited it now. OMG Only I would make a mistake on the vvery first word of the entire thing. XD

And YOU'RE WELCOME! And of course you deserve it but a'ight, you don't have to organize one for me either, BB! ILU x infinity and a day!!!!! <333333333333333333333333333

[kwansan]

I always love reading your work. You make the relationship between Izuru and Shuuhei so delicate yet intense. I could see the two of them in my head going through this scene.

That last part was heart-breaking. I feel sorry for Shuuhei, but at the same time, I want to smack him.

I'm definitely looking forward to the next part! ♥

[winteraconite]

You make the relationship between Izuru and Shuuhei so delicate yet intense. Wow, thank you! I'm glad you think so!

And Re: Shuu - Yes, I feel some smack-age is in order. Poor Kira. ::cuddles blondie:: Heck, if he kissed me, you won't be seeing me pulling away anytime soon. XD

I hope I don't disappoint you when the next part comes out!

Thank you for reading and commenting! ♥

[ceestar]

Uwaah Antha, another stunning piece of work!
I adore the slightly darker things where we are reminded the boys live with death so to speak. They are warriors after all. And you wrote them so well, trust Izuru to over work himself, and trust Shuuhei not to realise he had cut his cheek.

The emotions between them are a nice change too, different from the usual is what I mean. It's sutle but it's there, and I suppose their men are just choosing to turn a blind eye.

This was yet another brilliant piece, I cannot wait for more of it! And I'm really looking forward to more of Guilty Until Proven Guilty as well!

[ceestar]

INNOCENT!! Guilty until proven INNOCENT!!!

(it's been a long day...)

[winteraconite]

And you wrote them so well, Awww, thanks, Cee! ^^

And lol yes, I was getting tired of writing them all lovey-dovey (not that I'll stop) and decided to make things a smidge harder for them this time. These boys do sadness and angsty confusion so well. 8D

I'm glad you like this, Cee! HOpe I don't disappoint you in the next parts of both fics! ::bites fingernails::

Thank you for reading and commenting! ♥

[ceestar]

Oh don't be like that, you could never disappoint me Antha!
If all your stories were rated out of 100, your past fics have all exceeded that limit so much you've got tonnes of points tucked away anyway, so never fear, I believe you will always hit 120%!
(did that make sense? It sort of made sense in my head...)

[letainajup]

AHHHh such a way to end! I was like NOOooOO Hisagi, don't say that...or NOooo Kira don't be like that! XDXDXD

OMG I did enjoy reading this (as always), I can always visualize the scene as I read your work! I like the way the tension between Kira and Hisagi, mix feelings and then some! WOOHOO I am excited for the next part!!!

[winteraconite]

But Hisagi was being mean! It made Kira sad so he had to be all bitchy to get back at him! XD But seriously, it must be the sadist in me, but I like how these boys can hurt each other so badly with a few simple words. ♥

I can always visualize the scene as I read your work! Oooh, I am glad for that! :D

I hope I don't disappoint you with the next part! Thank you for reading and commenting! ♥

[letainajup]

And that's why I enjoy it, be a SADIST! it brings good drama...can't always be sun shine and lolly pops yes?! ^^

You...disappoint?! NEVER! I always look forward to reading them >D