This isn't a heavy AU, but there's a lot of terminology that's different. I'll probably have to post a glossary with the actual fic, but for now just roll with it.
HMMM. Finn is a magician... OF DEATH. Awesome. The glossary/vocab concept looks interesting - the new words you threw in didn't make me want to claw my eyes out (the way some fantasy does - I'm so freaking picky with fantasy), so I am really optimistic.
This idea seems really complex - a lot of little details and ideas coming together, and it's great because I honestly have no idea where this is going.
I've read a lot of stories that introduce new vocabulary and I agree with you; some create slight differences that really make me believe it's a new world, others just confuse the hell outta me. So I'm trying to keep the changes understandable.
This scene isn't the first in the fic, I used it because it introduces the basic concept; but there's already some plot points coming together in this scene and a lot more that have to be introduced. I'm getting the feeling that it's gonna be a long fic.
Haha, it appears my snippet has done its job and attracted some interest then :)
I wrote this in the early hours of the morning so there may be a little mistake or two, that said I think that "a few moments silent thought" is an acceptable phrasing.
this sounds awesome : D though i had to look up a few words i didn't understand - i guess these are the ones you invented. don't do this to a poor german girl! xD i'm confused!
but i really like your fic to this point and i'm looking forwards to the rest. though i think there will be a loooot of rest xD
When I post the actual fic I'll use footnotes or a glossary for the made-up words so that should make things easier for everyone.
Yeah, I've pretty much got the stasis and trigger handled; just need a little bit of exposition to establish the need-to-know info and then it's on with the plot!
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This idea seems really complex - a lot of little details and ideas coming together, and it's great because I honestly have no idea where this is going.
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This scene isn't the first in the fic, I used it because it introduces the basic concept; but there's already some plot points coming together in this scene and a lot more that have to be introduced. I'm getting the feeling that it's gonna be a long fic.
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I wrote this in the early hours of the morning so there may be a little mistake or two, that said I think that "a few moments silent thought" is an acceptable phrasing.
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though i had to look up a few words i didn't understand - i guess these are the ones you invented. don't do this to a poor german girl! xD i'm confused!
but i really like your fic to this point and i'm looking forwards to the rest. though i think there will be a loooot of rest xD
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Yeah, I've pretty much got the stasis and trigger handled; just need a little bit of exposition to establish the need-to-know info and then it's on with the plot!
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