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[eighthoctave]

Title: Lunch Break
Rating: NC-17 you have been warned
Characters: Finn/Will
Summary: MPS (mindless plotless smut). Hasn't been any for a while and i was listening to toxic. My first attempt at NC-17 so you know....go easy on me :D

Comments

[madmenfanatic]

yes! Excellent fic! But... did I miss it or did Finn just leave Will hangng?

Your first attempt at NC-7 was an A+. Thanks for having the courage to give it a try.

[eighthoctave]

yup but as will states in the last line......they're going to have a niccccceeeeeee evening

[hopenight]

Why does the awesome filthy smut end there?!?!

[eighthoctave]

muah ha ha ha i had homework :/ trust me i could have written a lot more :D

[tawg]

My brain is kinda gooey now. I got to the Britney line and was all "Okay, this is a dream and that's the song playing on Finn's clock radio?" But no, it was actual smut. Real, true, amazing smut.

And damn it was hot.

I loved Finn wearing Will's clothes. I think this is the first time I've seen that kink of mine indulged. And not shaving. Mmm, scruffy. And I really liked the acknowledgment that Will is quite the snappy dresser. Mmm, teacher-clothes... Oh yeah, and that part with the blow job was pretty good too :p

[eighthoctave]

i was listening to toxic at the time and considering i have just watched the video (HOW HOT CAN WILL GET) i may be writing more :P

[momoda6]

omgomgomg biting, wearing the other's clothes, misuse of ties and unshavenness and so much more

My bingo card is pretty much complete after reading this fic. Or, it potentially will be if you write more. WHICH YOU ARE, RIGHT? D:

Oh, and the britney line should have been really cheesy but somehow it wasn't. I don't know how you managed that but it means you're amazing.

[eighthoctave]

i have discovered i have talent for smut.....peed off my english coursework can't be like winn smut........

So you want me to write the evening *cough*bondage*cough*
Gimme a week DARN YOU GCSE's and i shall see what my ever so dirty hormonal brain can come up with.

[momoda6]

lmao when I was trying to write my AS level english coursework it ended up being really smutty somehow, even though it was a monologue about death. x_x The internet is a bad influence on me, clearly.

But let's face it, a talent at writing smut > good GCSEs. OR you could combine them and start shipping characters in whatever boring book you have to read. I'm pretty sure Of Mice and Men would have been a lot less painful if I'd been looking for sexual tension between Curly and George, or imagined Romeo and Tybalt having hatesex. >.>

omg I just remembered I have a philosophy essay due in tomorrow

[eighthoctave]

Of mice and Men is our literature piece as well :D and of course romeo had hate sex with tybalt......so obvious (to a slashers brain anyway)

[anonymous]

Great job considering that was your first time writing smut! I approve. :)

Captcha = also came. Hah!