Fic: Assumptions

[alicebluegown16]

Title: Assumptions
Author: alicebluegown16
Rating: PG-13
Character/Pairing: Will/Finn, OFC
Summary: Will and Finn are sort of like high school sweethearts.
AN: I started wondering how Finn would explain his relationship with Will to an outsider who wasn't there from the beginning, especially when you consider the age factor and the teacher/student

Comments

[momoda6]

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I love your original characters just as much as the glee characters, I swear. I think most people would bang Will like a gong if given a chance.

I kind of love Finn's intelligentally romantic idea of why they'll stay together.

Holy shit do I need to play kamikaze karaoke. Although knowing my friends it'd just be multiple renditions of Barbie Girl and me not finding it as funny as anyone else.

And um, yay.

[momoda6]

Thanks and glad you liked Ellie. Writing original characters is effing terrifying.

Kamikaze Karaoke is pretty much the best thing ever--especially after a few drinks.

Nothing says fun times like making a 6'7'' football player sing 'Stand By Your Man.'

[nikkibakerrr]

i can't tell you how much i loved thissss.
fantasticc !

[alicebluegown16]

Thanks and glad you liked

[hermiones_twin]

This, as always, was so awesome. Ellie is cute, I wanna hug her.

My boyfriend is 16 years older than me, and I always feel the need to do the "It's not creepy!" thing, haha. So that was pretty cute and accurate.

*thumbs up*

[hermiones_twin]

Thank you and super glad and relieved that you liked Ellie.

My step dad is 21 years older than my mom. It shouldn't work but it totally does and that's kind of the vibe I was going for.

[tawg]

I quite liked how you handled Ellie - you put in all the little clues and then still delivered the bombshell that, no, she didn't have a perfect life and that, yes, she probably is quite good at covering that up. And she was a good sounding board for some of Finn's issues to show up against.

And then Finn sang hot for teacher and made out with Will in front of sorority girls, which is pretty much the best way to end a fic ever.

[alicebluegown16]

Thank you.

Glad you liked Ellie and relieved that the big reveal worked. I tried to drop hints that all wasn't as it seemed and I was worried it came off as totally obvious.

I almost went crazy trrying to come up with the perfect closing scene and then it came to me like a revelation from on high. Finn+Will+Dirty Karaoke makeout session=good times.

I would kill to be drunk sorority girl witnessing that.

[scarecrowqueen]

you did it again, damn you! If this series was a person, I'd totally be crushing into a fine powder right about now.

Btw, the whole "it's not creepy, i swear!" thing? I totally do that with my wife (we're 13 years apart) Probably half the reason I love this story so much right there, you somehow manage to make Will and Finn sound just like all of us regular married folk out there. Kudos :D

[alicebluegown16]

Thank you and so glad the age difference dynamic rang true.

My step-dad is two decades older than my mom and I've seen how they are---it shouldn't make perfect sense but it does and I wanted to convey that.