Fic. Claimed

[alicebluegown16]

Title: Claimed
Author:alicebluegown16
Rating: NC-17
Character/Pairing: Will, Finn, Bryan Ryan, Will/Finn, mentions of past Will/Bryan
Summary: Finn's kind of possessive, Will kind of likes it, and oh yeah, sometimes living well is the best revenge.
AN: For the winn prompt meme: Finn acting all caveman staking his claim in front of Bryan Ryan and Will

Comments

[tawg]

“You mean you’re not actually an eccentric billionaire who just teaches as a hobby? Our whole relationship is built on a lie, Will!” “I trusted you, Will! If that’s even your real name!”
I lolled at that so much. That line may be popping into my head and making me laugh for a while. There were so many cute things - the condoms, Bryan searching to see if he'd been mentioned, Finn totally rubbing their relationship in Bryan's face. Dirty things in front of the waffle display. Mmm. And then Will talking Finn to death.

Even with the smallest scenes you manage to layout how complicated and committed their relationship is.

[glambertgirl]

I agree with you completely! I'll be laughing at that line for awhile too!

[alicebluegown16]

Thanks.

Like I told you earlier, I have been dying to write some Finn staking his claim in front of Bryan Ryan fic, so this was way fun to do.

I may have made Finn mature a lot over the course of the series, but sometimes it's just too much of a good time to just let him be a slightly immature guy going 'nah, nah, nah he's mine now!'

[hermiones_twin]

AHHHH So awesome. As always. Your work is wonderful, and hot, and adorable, and... <3. You're great at capturing the dynamic of an age-gap relationship (I'm in one, so I would know!), but still making it so adorably unique to Will and Finn. Love.

[alicebluegown16]

I've never been in an age gap relationship (okay, my h.s boyfriend was a couple of years older, but no biggie) so I super glad to know that the dynamics ring true.

I mean I can't ignore it obviously, but I worry that I make too much of a deal out of it.

[momoda6]

Bryan fucking Ryan.

I love a good bitchy queen so the whole thing was pretty epic for me. And then you follow it with posessive sex and I feel totally spoilt.

I may or may not have had to pause to process the 'grower and a shower' line. *cough*

Your characterisation and the easiness of their relationship is just so good to read. The way your stories are written seems so effortless, and it totally reflects how Finn and Will are and it's so gooood. It's quite interesting that things like tripping over the carpet and 'talk you to death' stick out more than, yknow, the actual sex. Cos you know I like the porn. :P

Anyway it's 2am so I'm too lazy to gush properly. I live for this series. That is all. <3

[alicebluegown16]

Bryan fucking Ryan, indeed.

I love how easily that basically became his name in my head.

I love a good bitchy queen as well and I LOVE occasionally petty and jealous Finn, so this was so much author wish fullfillment it's kind of sad.

So glad you liked and so glad it worked for you, tripping over the carpet included. I just can't write them serious-there has to be some element of humor or I get bored.

And the grower and shower line---I'm twelve, I swear. I should not be so amused by the idea of Finn basically being all "I HAVE A HUGE DICK!! WHATTYA SAY TO THAT?"

[uniquegrl7]

I loveloveloved this!!!!!! It was hot and sweet and funny all at the same time. I love how Finn and Terri's fantasies of revenge basically came true.

[alicebluegown16]

Thanks.

I know, right? Hah, finding out the ex you dumped in high school is now getting it good and proper from a hot twenty year old is basically the universe's equivalent of running you over with a car.