Day One 2 (DZ 4)

[mshorr]

Title: Day One 2 (Part 4 of Day Zero)
Author: Mshorr
Rating: NC-17 (For sure this time)
Summary: Class ends, tutoring beings. Finn discovers a talent for dirty talk and working with his feet.
Warnings: Language, aggressive Finn, passive Will. (no topping or bottoming yet sorry) No beta cause I suck that way.
Authors notes: This is the single dirtiest

Comments

[madmenfanatic]

wow. I had to read it again and soon as I finished it the first time!

Honestly while I was reading it, I thought, "Nuh-uh, Finn wouldn't have the balls to do that." (But hell, I got porn out of it, so i didn't care all that much.) However, the ending made it all better. Finn panicking and running out. Will's reaction "I'm going to prison". And I loved his last sentence - he liked it. A lot. Which means it will happen again. The damage is already done anyway, right?

I'm guessing for the next tutoring session, they don't bother going to the library. They'll just lock Will's door.

[mshorr]

Lol. That's how I see it happening too. Finn really wouldn't normally have the balls to do this. I was thinking that if he's only gotten laid once in the last two years he's probably seen and read a whole lot of porn though. So it wasn't so much Finn deciding to take the lead. It was Finn going on auto-pilot and echoing all that porn he's been using to combat his frustration. The next chapter will probably concentrate on the two of them calming each other down. Finn's going to have to convince Will that he's not being taken advantage of by "a nasty old teacher" if he wants that to happen again. I do like the idea of the next tutoring session not being at the school though. I'm going to steal that shamelessly. Thanks!