Comments | winnners: Fic: Decirme Cosas Sucias / Talk Dirty to Me

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Fic: Decirme Cosas Sucias / Talk Dirty to Me

Feb 02, 2011 21:51

Title: Decirme Cosas Sucias / Talk Dirty to Me
Author: tawg
Recipient: darkwords_ifind
Word Count: ~2,500
Rating: NC-17
Warnings Porn. Explicit, shameless, teacher/student porn.
Summary: For some reason, their tutoring sessions aren’t really helping Finn’s grades.
Notes: I didn’t follow a single prompt you gave me, but I did take the idea of aggressive, red-blooded ( Read more... )

!community fic exchange, fanwork: fanfic, contributor: tawg, rating: nc17

Comments 13

alicebluegown16 February 2 2011, 14:18:33 UTC

Oh, te amo, te amo, te amo!

This was deliciously hot and dirty and fabulous!

I was congratulating myself on knowing most of the dirty Spanish talk.

Apperently I actually did learn something in the four years I took!

tawg February 4 2011, 06:50:38 UTC

I will admit, I had a lot of fun looking the dirty Spanish talk up.

I'm glad that you liked it, and that it left you satisfied :p

yaoi_ezi February 2 2011, 14:21:41 UTC

That was so hot and the image left by the end of a Will Schuester fucked out of his mind totally wrecked with his clothes still on his naked sweaty cum stained frame... that was so hot and the Spanish made it even sexier. Very nice job!

tawg February 4 2011, 06:51:43 UTC

:D

I'm glad I'm not the only one who found that image hot. That would have been awkward... Thank you so much for commenting! I always worry a bit when posting porn.

psyko_kittie February 2 2011, 15:00:11 UTC

*brain equals slushified* OMG! Hot and just freaking awe.some!! :D

tawg February 4 2011, 06:52:46 UTC

Haha, your icon is very appropriate!

darkwords_ifind February 2 2011, 15:00:49 UTC

Ay dios mio! Muy caliente! Excuse me while I gather my brain up from the mess of goo pooled at my feet.
Thank you soooooo much for top!Finn. Me gusta mucho mucho.
And that image of Will fucked senseless...unf
This was just what I needed after a long few days at work.
Muchos gracias :)

tawg February 4 2011, 06:56:06 UTC

Glad I could help you unwind :p

Top Finn is just... there should be more of it.

dark_dreymer February 5 2011, 00:15:14 UTC

Guh; hot, dirty, rough, desperate sex. Hot!

I love the hint we get of Will's side of the situation though, he's a little reluctant to 'tutor' Finn and while Finn's saying 'I love you', Will's only response is specifically 'I want you'. Not sure if that was intentional, but the hint of depth to the sex makes this so much better than just a hot piece of smut.

Noticed a little spelling error here and there (But I'd be a hypocrite to complain, I know my own proof-reading leaves something to be desired), but one that stood out is taught/taut; it's a homophone error I see across fanfic every once in a while. Taut is the variation that should be used when describing something as tense or tight.

tawg February 5 2011, 01:16:01 UTC

Thanks for point those out - and seriously, point out ANY errors that you ever find in my fics. I much prefer that to having fics full of errors and embarrassing typos.

And yes, the contrast of "Te quiero" to "Te deseo" was intentional. I'm glad someone noticed :D

dark_dreymer February 5 2011, 01:23:35 UTC

Part of the reason I love foreign languages is the contrasts they can have in translation. In French there's two words for 'bitch', one that specifically means 'female dog' and one that is an insult; knowing that helped me get round the "Bitch is a female dog, dogs pee on trees, trees are part of nature, nature is beautiful and so really you're calling me beautiful" retort the girls in Year 8 used to use.

So yeah, when I see people using that contrast in fic it always gives me a little happy :3