Second Chapter!

[health_hazzard]

Title: All I want for Christmas (2/2?)
Rating: R/NC17?
Word Count: ~5,000
Pairing: Winn, vague mentions of various other canon pairings.
Summary: Finn finally makes it to Mr. Schue’s apartment and they have some quality time together.
A/N: Here is the second chapter to my generic Christmas Fic. It took a lot longer than I thought it would be. Again

Comments

[madmenfanatic]

"fin?" Hell no, you are not finished! You are not finished til Finn is! And Will again since he is still hard.

My absolute favorite line was when Finn was saying he knew Will was reponsible and ethical and Will responded with, “You give me too much credit.” THAT made all my nervouness go away. :)

Thanks for an awesome Chapter 2.

[health_hazzard]

LOL! I didn't plan on continuing but since I rushed the ending I think I might. I have another idea I might merge with this fic so it's not just sex in the next chapter (although from a reader's perspective that's not a bad thing).

Yeah that was one of the first things that came to me when I started the fic. I totally think that is canon Will though. He does the best he can to be a good responsible person and other people idealize him. And when he slips or makes exceptions they reject him (manwhore) so he just tries to keep up it up until he can't.

Thanks for commenting and I'm glad you liked the chapter! I wouldn't get my hopes up about another chapter since school is starting soon so I might not have time, but It's looking positive at the moment.

[yaoi_ezi]

My dear that was quite hot! It most definitely cannot end like that! There is still much more Christmas loving to be had

[health_hazzard]

(Damn I have to write this again since I accidentally deleted it the first time!) Anyway.

Is it hot? I don't make it a habit to write pron so I was hoping it didn't sound awkward or too vague. I'm glad you seemed to like it.

Actually I have already started brainstorming on what comes next. And it's not just gratuitous sex, that means it most likely will be more than one chapter (probably more than two but let's not get ahead of ourselves.) It won't all be happy though (the news makes me want to do bad things) :( But I have to keep it interesting!

[tawg]

I really loved the mistletoe plan, and all the little hiccups in the story like Will mistaking Finn for the delivery guy, and the Christmas beer tasting awful. Their heart to heart was really interesting to read, it was nice to see them lay all the cards out on the table and break down where they were at in their romantic lives (I got a laugh out of Suzy Pepper approving). And the Christmas sex? Well, that was all kinds of hot.