Hey Moon, Please Forget to Fall Down, for midnightindomie

Aug 19, 2016 11:14

Title: Hey Moon, Please Forget to Fall Down
Recipient: midnightindomie
Pairing/Characters: Seungyoon/Mino, kid!Taehyun
Rating: PG-13 (mild adult language)
Summary: Seungyoon raises an eyebrow. “Then what kind of boys did you think I was into?”
Mino pouts exaggeratedly and gives Seungyoon his best puppy dog eyes. “Me.”
Notes: ok warning: i’m really bad at writing ( Read more... )

pairing: mino/seungyoon, ! 2016, character: taehyun, rating: pg-13

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anonymous August 20 2016, 05:00:21 UTC
I never knew I needed a fic with kid!Taehyun before this. I love how on point your characterization is. How he takes no shit from his daddy. Wait that didn't sound right. Anyway, I love the bits where kid!Taehyun takes care of Yoon in his subtle kinda naggy ways.

Now, on to Minyoon! Ah, it's like a domestic!au without the defined relationship. I love how they take care of each other. I love cutie Mino getting jealous and possessive and being such a quiet comfort to Yoon.

You switched between Minyoon POVs without confusing me so good job on that.

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midnightindomie August 20 2016, 07:09:57 UTC
iI WILL COME BACK

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midnightindomie August 21 2016, 09:50:49 UTC
OK HELLO YES FIRST OF ALL: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
SECOND OF ALL yoU USED P!ATD LYRICS!!! IT'S MY FAV P!ATD SONG HOW DID U KNOwwwwww
anyways
minyoon with chi l d ta ehy un i cant believe!!!!!!!!!!!!! you chose this prompt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
im so fnsjefsefrb this was so cute and fluff there is nothing you should apologize for i am so happy this is the cutestd,,,,,!,,1
hhhhhhhhhhhhhh im weak bye

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kocch August 21 2016, 17:27:53 UTC
this is every shade of perfect, it's truly so beautiful and heartfelt and warm and just the loveliest thing i've ever read. I loved the characters so much, it's just so on point (loved kid Taehyun x daddy Seungyoon so much uh), and it has such a domestic vibe that's just like that dream and light that helps Seungyoon every day. The relationship between those three was really something special, to treasure and love, and seriously!!!! i love this so much, thank you

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fivesky5 August 26 2016, 02:06:20 UTC
Ah, this fic.. Ah.. I never imagine kid Taehyun is this adorable with his witty like Seungyoon Appa.
I feel like I'm witnessing this family just in front of my eyes. I feel like I'm that messy Kang Seungyoon who will just immerse on Mino and Taehyun at night. Ugh so much sweetness in one fic I clearly not wanting this as a single fic and want chapters instead.

Though, I love the open ending so much. This so flexible relationship of MinYoon. I love it when Mino carefully takes care of him every day. the plot and the story flows perfectly. and I really like the humor.

Kudos, author.

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