Not Immune

[falsemurmur]

title: Not Immune
fandom: Heroes
summary: Peter watched her, loved her in silence as she and Gabriel formed their lives together. But they both got to relish in an unspoken love those nights that they'd get together for their drinks of water.
characters/pairings: Elle, Peter, Noah (Petrelli?), Elle/Gabriel,

Comments

[motylik]

Awesome. Kinda sad, but not too sad. I liked their ritual and that Noah knew and was ok with it. Great fic. Poor Peter, troubled by his dreams. I like that they didn't act on their feelings.

[falsemurmur]

Thank you so much!

[livingdoll216]

I love this. I could definitely see a love triangle between Peter/Elle/Gabriel happening on the show. For some reason I just don't see Elle/Gabriel working out in the long run

"she never completely grasped the whole “in love” thing"

I love that line. I think that is pretty much where Elle is at on the show. I don't think she knows what real love is.

As always awesome fic!

[falsemurmur]

I don't see the G/Elle working out in the long run either - it's like they're too alike and are being pushed together too forcibly for me to really fathom the pairing.

Thanks a load for the wonderful review. :)

[eternal_moonie]

I love this! It's one of my fave Elle pairings!

[falsemurmur]

Thank you! :D

[whimsey]

When you wrote "Now this is the first P/Elle fic I’ve written in which we don’t get…P/Elle", it made me sad, but reading this...in the end, we don't necessarily get P/Elle or E/G. It's right in the middle. But for me, I could sense that we do get P/Elle.

This is awesome. I couldn't help but get a little teary-eyed.

Little Noah knew and he understood that was what his mom and Peter needed.

[falsemurmur]

Thanks so much, sweetie. Yeah, I don't consider it to be entirely P/Elle because it's established that she's with Gabriel, but we do get to see her with Peter in a way. I really wanted to involve Noah in this and give him a small perception of his mother's and Peter's relationship, so I'm glad you could note that. :)

[wordsflow]

I finally got around to reading this, and... sobs. I don't know, I'm probably PMSing but this fic brought up so many feelings to the surface and now I'm like tearing up because of all the could have been's (which is like my favourite things ever to think about) and just how melancholic and sad and just so perfect Peter/Elle is. I won't lie, I ship Elle with everyone, but Peter/Elle holds a very special place in my heart. So, long story short, I love this so so so much. ♥

[falsemurmur]

Admittedly, the first time I read this story through after finishing it, it made me ache a little. And especially since what's happened to Elle, I think the "could have beens" resonate a little stronger now. And Peter/Elle obviously have a place in my heart too, since I can't seem to let them go even after everything.

Thanks so, so much, sweetie. Your compliments mean so much, and I'm really just glad to know that you liked this!